HiT'PaNiK vs. Kost

[Awdo Grafh.]

8-10 Lines
Post By Tonite
no crew - dr- bla bla bla just no bullshit
some explinations please on votin

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[El Chapo]

Verse Gettin Posted Soon up






~Checkin In~

[El Chapo]

Look, Man your shit is bogus||1
I can't believe you thought it was hot when you wrote it||2
Your flow is weaker than an infant with osteoporosis||3
So without further notice~I'm a leave you properly toasted on a Mic cause you aint worthy to hold it||4
Understand dog you just can't rap here||5
You're gay.... and I done tested more pussy than a papsmear||5
Even over the internet the whores in your fam gonna let a brother score||6
I UPLOAD my dick and give HARD DRIVES to your MOTHER's BOARD||7
Thats why Im the guy your little sister looks like||8
I know you had to be wondering why she doesn't look white||9
Well that answers your questions~I'll eat you in one session, then so for seconds before indigestion gets time to set in||10


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[Awdo Grafh.]

one suggestion - neva fuck with this kid who can spit quick
and spit lines that turn timbaland into a toothpick
i got this greed for whack mc's - some would call it a glutton
so to succeed my needs i just HiT the 'PaNik button
now thats the punch ---- so start takin notes
cuz i got more lines then an 8 ball of coke
your a clown - your a joke - a newbie with no hope
your verses get rejected - like that shit you just wrote
battling me? -- -- -- damn bitch you must be jokin
cuz im the lord of voting rings just like J.R Tolken

[Awdo Grafh.]

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[Q.S]

Kost

your a clown - your a joke - a newbie with no hope
your verses get rejected - like that shit you just wrote

^ Good Line LMAO!!!!!

i got this greed for whack mc's - some would call it a glutton
so to succeed my needs i just HiT the 'PaNik button

^ BURN!

aight

Hipnatik

So without further notice~I'm a leave you properly toasted on a Mic cause you aint worthy to hold it

^ Oh no!

Well that answers your questions~I'll eat you in one session, then so for seconds before indigestion gets time to set in

I dont like ur barz and hypens and numbering.. but if u fix that then it would be mch better

well my vote goes to

Hipnatik....

Kost u came hard but next time use more metaz and wordplay..

[Q.S]

woops well I meant Hit Panki My Bad

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damn i need my reading glasses

[menolin]

opener:tie
closer:kost
wordplay:hit panik
punches:tie
structure:kost
overall:kost

nice battle y'all, but that was my breakdown of things

[cutastraphe]

aight--hitpanik ya had a good flow, good structure, couple aight punches kinda creative---kost ya had a ok flow, couple aight disses, ok structure, overall not hard enuff punches or flow to beat histpanik here--vote=hitpanik

[LM]

I'll vote on this after ya's vote on this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86304

A favour for a favour. Drop an honest vote

[Xeon]

HiT'PaNiK

god punches and wordplay + fun ta read

best line----v

Thats why Im the guy your little sister looks like||8
I know you had to be wondering why she doesn't look white||9


kost
good flow and wordplay + ok mult and metts but weaker punches
best line----v

one suggestion - neva fuck with this kid who can spit quick
and spit lines that turn timbaland into a toothpick


overall vote = HiT'PaNiK

[Awdo Grafh.]

uppin fo votes

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[El Chapo]

Got Dammit Vote Please Peeps





Uppin this shit NOW~~~~~

[El Chapo]

Uppin this shit ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~PLEASE VOTE

[pedro nok]

breakdown:

Flow and structure:kost

Punches and personals and wordplay;hit


Overall:hit panic

could ya hit this up cos it's bein slept on like a mattress

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86677

thanx....honest vote a breakdown appreciated