10-15 lines...
no crew votes, no hate votes, and esp. no d/r.
I spit first... no feeding... first to five wins... g'luck nigga.
steelfist
A.T.
10-15 lines...
no crew votes, no hate votes, and esp. no d/r.
I spit first... no feeding... first to five wins... g'luck nigga.
DayumNation
AIIGHT CHECKING.. SPIT FIRST AND ILL RESPOND........................................... .................................................. ..........
aiyo...
Feel the wrath of this battle rappin cat attackin the steel fist of all people,
in the aftermath of this battle rap, average cats "steel" couldnt feel you.
You steppin to me? I dunno what the fuck you and your crew is on,
but in a battle wit me, you couldnt "save" your ass if you handed me "coupons."
Your punches aint phasin me like I was being hit with throw pillows,
I blow up middle weights with steel fist, cause they cant lift the shit they spit, like most fellows...
I'm nostilogic, have the most logic, but common sense should tell you that I drop the hottest.
See, I'm const-ant-ly droppin frees that even steel fist couldnt crush,
you gotta be nuts to be facin me, you can look at the screen but not touch...
with a record of five and four, you seem to still be inspired...
but every cat on rap battles seems to think your weak ass should retire!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................... ............
no beef... just a battle dawgy... hit it up
DayumNation
lol.. i got you
ILL PUT HIS FAGGOT AT.. IN HIS PLACE SEE,
WHEN I HIT HIS LIP UP THAT SHIT WILL SWELL LIKE JAY-Z'S
IM COOL AS AN AC- BUT WHEN THIS FAGGOT WANTS TO FACE ME
ILL MURDER HIS PREGNANT GIRL.. LIKE SCOTT PETERSON DID TO LACY
FANS EMBRACE ME.. YOUR JUST A DISGRACE G
SEE NIGGA THESE LYRICS ARE RECEIVED LETHAL
YOU COULDNT PEN SICK LYRICS WRITIING WITH A DISEASED NEEDLE
PLEASE BLACK YOU NEED TO EASE BACK
you couldnt get a BUZZ of your raps even if they was STUCK IN BEESWAX
lol... VOTES
UPPIN FO' VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................... .................................................. .................................................. ................. STILL WANTIN VOTES>>>> come on people... vote... lol
no really.... please vote
DayumNation
lol.. whats so fuckin funny dog............................................... .........................
I gots to give this one to A.T
Steel was rocking lots of played lines man, (Swelling lips~Jayz, buzz~beezwax)
so vote goe to A.T
vote = AT
hit this battle up wit an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81251
liked both verses but heres the breakdown
wordplay=steel
vocab=tie
multis=steel
creativity=A.T
flow=steel
complexity=A.T.
punches=A.T.
vote=A.T. reason being is because i think i've heard the last line of steels verse before, i dont know if you bit it or recycled it, either way it cost you a shot at the win
the jayz line way played too
anyway dope verse form bothe was A.T. verse a little more
no hate or beef wit steelfist, seen you come stronger, but A.T had a better verse in my opinion
holla
bit.. lol.. yeah right man.. ive never bittin any lines before.. uppin for votes
and you can tell that i typed my shit up on the computer instead of wirtting it down.. other than dudes first two lines.. most of his shit could have been prewrittni now you know mine couldnt have been prewrittin cuz i rhymed his name consecutive times
aight... STILL UPPIN............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................................
DayumNation
^^^^^^Originally posted by DaCurse
liked both verses but heres the breakdown
wordplay=steel
vocab=tie
multis=steel
creativity=A.T
flow=steel
complexity=A.T.
punches=A.T.
vote=A.T. reason being is because i think i've heard the last line of steels verse before, i dont know if you bit it or recycled it, either way it cost you a shot at the win
the jayz line way played too
anyway dope verse form bothe was A.T. verse a little more
no hate or beef wit steelfist, seen you come stronger, but A.T had a better verse in my opinion
holla
nice explanation, i think i'll use it 2.......
my shit aint PREWRITTEN... FUCK THAT... IF YOU CANT TELL i FUCKIN USED YOUR NAME LIKE 3 TIMES...
DAMN... HOW MANY PERSONALS DO I HAVE TO THROW IN... I NEVER PREWRITE........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
QUIT BITCHIN AND I HAVE SEEN THAT JAY Z LINE BEFORE... AND THAT BEEZWAX ONE... YOUR LUCKY IF SOMEONE DONT TURN YOU INTO I.R. AND HAVE YOUR ASS BANNED....
DayumNation
yo dunn keep talking shit.. you amuse me.. respond again bitch............................................. .................................................. ........................
yo at.. your a bitchman.. when is your moms gonna suck my dick?............................................. .................................................. ..
a.t. poll vote in my battle against fundamentalz u forgot to................................................ ..excuse the fp................................................ ............................................
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