TrIfLiN .vs. Purple Haze

[Xpoz'D]

Sixteen Lines Max Per Battler Per Battle
Verses Due: Saturday Midnight Pacific Time
Must Sign in atleast 24 hours before deadline!
Voting concludes on Monday
PLEASE READ THE LLL RULES ... I REPEAT READ THE
LLL RULES BEFORE POSTING A VERSE.



Well the Lethal Lyricist League has officially been kicked off. We hope to make this the last league to have to restart on rb. I will be modding it, bringing you magazines, hype features, power ranking, pre-match intros, etc, etc, etc .. constantly adding stuff to make this league the dopest on the net. So if you know any heads that arent signed up, bring them to sign them up. Bring their parents along to if you like. Make sure to read the rules and welcome to Triple L .. Good luck to all the battlers.

[Derive]

signing in, ill spit in a bit

[Derive]

STARTER

first battle of the tourney and im up against triflin,my lyrics will blast his body and have the audience 'flippin'//(excited and entertained)
triflin couldnt bust a-decent-verse if his life was on-the-lines,hed spit something whack to try to look like it was-mines//
triflin is an expert at sucking dick masturbating with a stick,in this battle hes helpless as teh audience polls in my 'kicks'(my votes)//
triflins mind is shocked at the site of my 'destructive' verses,triflins a faggot whos always carrying around 'purses'//

SPEEDING IT UP

my lines flash hives all through your blood stream and veins,my lyrics blow out your mind and is impossible to 'substain'//(to resist)
its your fault that you entered this tourney since you knew youd face me 'eventually',triflins mind is in paralization because my lyrics have murdered him mentally//
my physical capacity is to far superior for you to handle,my lines smack you up across the head like a gold-plated sandal//
im a 'lyrical destructive' mc comming at ya like 1-2-3,spitting lethal lines until your heads lost in an unknown 'economy'//
my lyrics spit venom like lethal injections right to the head,after just reading one of my lines youve fainted and been said to-be-dead//
i have a 'chaotic catastrophy' that slices up anyone in my path,youve walked up into a death-trap your gonna be murdered by my 'deadly wrath'//
its a shame that youve been left to shocked to even speak a word,say this word in spanish and it describes you,'a bird'//
(un pajaro that means a faggot)
youve been publically embarrased and youll never show your face here again,you will always remember this day that ive murdered you and its the day that you will 'amend'//(always recall)

FINISHER

youve been delt with and by now youve learned your lesson,consider the fact that ive ended your life a belssin//
triflin could never have competed with my lines but then again neither could anyother rapper,your in this shit hiding in the corner turning on your own 'clapper'//(since your verse will suck you brought along a machine that makes cheer noises)
youve been lyrically murdered by a very skilled spitter,triflin aint gonna respond because hes a major at being-a-quitter//

-Purple Haze

[TrIfLiN]

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TRIFLIN...

[TrIfLiN]

I’m still trying to Question Why’d You rap For?
Haze Your not even worth the 16 X poz’D Ask for
I have to admit In this battle you’re the Worst Now
Haze’s like L. James, You’ll Go In The First Round
Disperse Rounds, Haze Shown Signs Of Wackness
Attack Shit, And Smoke Haze then Dispose of his ashes
I’m gonna walk over you like fat ass’es in denim skirts
Truth is It wasn’t even worth me feeding off your verse
I’m cancerous, Spit stones From trife’s views rocked’em
Fucked, Just admit it your style is like a Used condom
Your views rotten like I’m sharing this epidemic
Thinking Win, That’s funny when there’s no chance to get it
You got more fans to credit, Swaying votes Admit it.
This battle is similar to the end of the movie, yet you get no credit
I don’t feel bad that you have to lose like this
Just learn from your mistake of Pure Wackness

[A2Z]

ok let me kick this shit off...Purple Haze: Nice verse, coulda came harder, but not a shabby verse at all...

Triflin: I was unimpressed by your verse....the only line that stands out Haze’s :

like L. James, You’ll Go In The First Round

^^Thats a nice line but it wasnt enough

vote= Purple Haze

[Jay Pana]

not a great battle...

purple getz this...he had better punchez, linez were extended tho...

trif this izn't one of ur better battlez...punchez weren't that great which lost tha battle for u...

vote- purple haze

[Evolve]

Vote: Trife

to be honest Haze came to much like a Newbie... his lines were long and drawn out with punches that were very basic

Trife you came weak this battle... i have to admit that... but you didnt need to come hard to win

[mdizz]

vote triflin

for tha perpose that in a battle size doesnt always matter its about content

purple haze u had a super long lined verse and really jus a long ass pointless verse all ur punches were soft as hell and a lot of pretty much all of ur 'quotes' didnt make sense and hurt u instead becuase of that.

triflins mind is shocked at the site of my 'destructive' verses,triflins a faggot whos always carrying around 'purses'//
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that was tha newbiest shit ive ever seen in a while

tiflin had a simplistic verse but his punches were more direct even though he wasnt tryin to hard which he really did need to do anyway

[AC-Satch]

this was a good read...


both verses had their stong spots, and both verses had their wackspots...


heh, but overall i think Trif came harder..and had a better rhyme

Purple had some good multis and better flow

and the punches go to Purple.. i was just feelin his more i gues :;


v0te = Haze

[Mystery~Murdera]

ohhh man, haze is winnin off that newb shit? I personally thought triflins verse was less than decent but hazes was even less than that, first off he-was-using these lil lines between shit that wasn't multis, his wordplay was whack as fuck, n he was explaining every damn thing he did, take that with some addition forced vocab, drawn out lines and no flow and you've got his verse in a nut shell. Damn how the fuck are people votin for him...

my 2 cents.

vote - triflin

[Baxter D. Wall]

ok....just because words rhyme it doesnt mean that you should use them in a battle....

"my physical capacity is to far superior for you to handle,my lines smack you up across the head like a gold-plated sandal//"

.......wack. unfortunately your verse was littered with this kind of stuff... dont get me wrong, Triflin wasnt that good either....but his was better than that.

vote=t

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i'm goin' wit purple haze on this one better punchlines and flow.............................................. ..

[G.Hod]

Triflin' took it quite easily. . Haze needs to stop worrying about the rhyme of the words and support his punches and personals with a decent flow.

Quotables. .
TRIFLIN
"I have to admit In this battle you’re the Worst Now
Haze’s like L. James, You’ll Go In The First Round"
Even though the first line was filler, it was a good concept

"I’m gonna walk over you like fat ass’es in denim skirts
Truth is It wasn’t even worth me feeding off your verse"
Cool

Purple Haze
There were a few quotables, I suppose, but the long bars hurt the flow so bad that I couldn't get into the verse as a whole . .

By the way, does pajaro really mean faggot, too?


VOTE: Triflin

[Ace Of Spades]

Originally posted by AC-Satch
this was a good read...


both verses had their stong spots, and both verses had their wackspots...


heh, but overall i think Trif came harder..and had a better rhyme

Purple had some good multis and better flow

and the punches go to Purple.. i was just feelin his more i gues :;


v0te = Haze

i feel the same way about this battle
tight, it was good
Peace