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Thread: This is just a song i wrote, tell me what ya think!!

  1. #1

    Question This is just a song i wrote, tell me what ya think!!

    i know it aint a rap song, but let me know what ya think!!


    “In The End”


    When I start to think about you
    All I seem to think about is pain
    the way you're makin me feel
    can’t be cured by a pill
    All this drama that ya put me through
    all these hard times will come back to you

    in the end you'll get what you deserve,
    in the end i won't be the only one that’s hurt
    in the end you'll finally feel what I feel
    then you'll get to see
    this ain't what love should be

    When I look back on all the fun we had
    all the good times are outshadowed by the bad
    When will you finally learn, when will you finally see
    when all this hurt comes back to you it'll be twice as bad as me

    in the end you'll get what you deserve,
    in the end i won't be the only one that's hurt
    in the end you'll finally feel what I feel
    then you'll get to see
    this ain't what love should be

    Why should i take all this hurt
    Why should i take all this pain
    there's no reason for me to stay
    so what am i doin here today
    I'm gone
    I'm leavin you today
    no reasons for me to stay
    that's why i'm writing you this song
    just to say i'm gone

    in the end you'll get what you deserve,
    in the end i won't be the only one that's hurt
    in the end you'll finally feel what I feel
    then you'll get to see
    this ain't what love should be

  2. #2
    LyL-e-InC
    Guest

    ...

    it was g0od...i was feelin it...

  3. #3
    Ghetto_Samurai
    Guest
    It was aight as far as i'm concerned a little simplistic but u know if dat's da tip u wanted it to be on u workin it kid ~1~

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