iight dawg its set tha rulez iz
10 barz max
no crew votes
no d/r votes no hate votes
no recycleing
no prewriting
3-0 = KO
4-0 = TKO
spit 30 min after check in
TillEyeDie
YOzLyricalKilla
iight dawg its set tha rulez iz
10 barz max
no crew votes
no d/r votes no hate votes
no recycleing
no prewriting
3-0 = KO
4-0 = TKO
spit 30 min after check in
hey this is not a check i was gone for a while i need to finish a battle
The Legion
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HoF x5
iight dawg w/e check in when ur " done " ( dis aint my checkin)
hey I need some votes on my battle so if ya'll vote on mine i'll vote on ya'lls
yo just to let you kno ur breakin da rules but its iight i will
yo its closed i couldnt vote but yo u took it all the way
checkin in cuz dis boy hasnt n hes scared of me....
ayo dawg y havent u checked in n spit, is it because none of ya punch lines eva hit//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing kit, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 spit//
ive seen ya pic dawg u a wing asain wit no eyebrows and tried 2 look gangsta//
lol dawg you aint Jin you aint gangsta final dont fuck wit me cuz im a shaksta//
you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son//
that asain pride shit needs ta change cuz ua name is till I die//
aint i jus bernt you u herb and left like you were eletricfied//
im done wit dis cat i aint even tryin spit//
i didnt even do well and im positive ive won dis shit//
in the 8th line it was soposed 2 be and not aint
i spit early cuz i gotta go pz
YO ya shit is pretty good but wtf y hasnt tilleyedie checked in and spit you should put 4 a no show pz
fuck that ive been busy my dad needed help making a new room
ill spit.. CHECK!
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HoF x5
u suck.. damn.. u shouldnt spit early nor fucking late
this bitch iz from yonkers.. but yet tilley holds ya fate
this bitch got originality.. hes a pretty, and baby Thug
Yeah hes Pretty babyish to be a thug.. so poor baby ya need a hug?
Fuck thati dont babby sit! i aint ya bitch nor ya mother soo why bother
This Bitch Get His Panties In A Knot.. Because I Help My Father
He's Brave 14 and He Wanna Step Up A Couple Of Years
Fuck It I Hit Hard In The Head.. Now Hes A Baby.. Wiping Tears
He It Dont Matter That I Force Rhymes.. Cuz I Force You
It Dont Matter.. I Force This Win.. Still My Name Aint Luke!
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HoF x5
YOzLyricalKilla
ayo dawg y havent u checked in n spit, is it because none of ya punch lines eva hit//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing kit, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 spit//
^^^^ok opener and ok personal.....^^^^^^
ive seen ya pic dawg u a wing asain wit no eyebrows and tried 2 look gangsta//
lol dawg you aint Jin you aint gangsta final dont fuck wit me cuz im a shaksta//
^^^^^^ha ha @ that line good personal but not on flow that good^^^^
you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son//
^^^^^^^^^^Weak Very Weak^^^^^^^^^^^^^
that asain pride shit needs ta change cuz ua name is till I die//
aint i jus bernt you u herb and left like you were eletricfied//
^^^^^^lol @ that line good punch personal and vocab^^^^^^^
im done wit dis cat i aint even tryin spit//
i didnt even do well and im positive ive won dis shit//
^^^^^^^ok closer^^^^^^^^^^
Overall- 9/10
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TillEyeDie
u suck.. damn.. u shouldnt spit early nor fucking late
this bitch iz from yonkers.. but yet tilley holds ya fate
^^^^^ok personal but you this line is blah^^^^^^^^
this bitch got originality.. hes a pretty, and baby Thug
Yeah hes Pretty babyish to be a thug.. so poor baby ya need a hug?
^^^^^^^ha ha @ this line this is sort of gay bad!!!^^^^^^^^^^^
Fuck thati dont babby sit! i aint ya bitch nor ya mother soo why bother
This Bitch Get His Panties In A Knot.. Because I Help My Father
^^^^^^weak personal no punch^^^^^
He's Brave 14 and He Wanna Step Up A Couple Of Years
Fuck It I Hit Hard In The Head.. Now Hes A Baby.. Wiping Tears
^^^^^nice line good personal ok punch^^^^^^
He It Dont Matter That I Force Rhymes.. Cuz I Force You
It Dont Matter.. I Force This Win.. Still My Name Aint Luke!
^^^^^^bad closer not a hard hitting punch niether
Overall-5/10
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my vote goes to YO because he got at TillEyeDie alot more he had harder hitting punches better flow structure was better and easier to read he also had funnyness aswell which i like alot he had a good opener and he had a few multis and he had alot more personals that killed TillEyeDie....yea so if i could poll vote i would vote for YOzLyricalKilla but dont worry this vote still counts....pz
thanx 2XL thanx 4 the honest vote and explaination yea i kno it counts dawg dont worry thats 1-0........... uppinx2
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