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    Eyez of a Young Nigga

    kinda keystyled dis just wanted 2 try sumthin new if yall dont like it I'll go back 2 da original
    but dis is like da same exact style as my 1st joint "holla at cha boi"


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    Remember our Love ( Full Rap ) - High Class
    At the swimming pool...[Keystyle] - PaYce
    It's Her N Me. . - FormulaMC

    (Verse 1)
    this nigga is kinda lookin beyond those bad times in life
    Good Ol Dayz are coming no mo mad rhymes no knief
    no mo yelling & no mo Brutal punches to a nigga's face
    now its just plans and taking lunches in different places
    1 little brother that looks up to me & hataz that mug me
    a Christian Mother thats dumb but caring who bugs me
    may not have cute eyez, but to tha ladies I bring smiles
    tha next day I see these bamma niggaz rockin my style
    but never rocking it as better as Young J did yesterday
    dont wanna go outside cold weather dont like my way
    to many bammaz and to many new people so its a no
    niggaz ask for a Blind Date 2 cuz I'm cool with tha hos
    I see a Young N' Beautiful lady that I'm trying to get wit
    but a nigga'z shyness & highness makes a nigga quit
    my Pimp Juice aint no longer wet its feelin its dryness
    on summer vacation in da desert absorbin food minus
    a lot of people who I loved that walked in and out of me
    Jasmine H. who changed me from a bitch nigga to a G
    I was once lost and saw strangers but now we're cool
    I see my favorite cuzin as a comedian actin like a fool
    and her twin going far wit her smooth and deep poetry
    A Past Memory...this phatty gurl that tried to go wit me
    so I denied it so I saw her staring at me right after that
    I'll only shut my eyez foreva if tha tha big man chooses
    but for now wit my high elevation 4 me theres no loses
    Eyez of a Young Nigga
    Last edited by YJ; January 2nd, 2004 at 12:14 AM
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    That is some hot ass shit captain. Structure was good and the wordplay was emaculate. keep up that good shit and i don't know what ya other style is but u should stick wit dat shit

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    yeah this was alright i thought....your structure in this was good....the flow was alright, it stayed on through out the piece i thought, didnt really get off.....you had some alright vocab....but overall this was alright....and keep at it.

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    thanx uppin!
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    uppin still
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    lol had a little mistake but uppin come on yall
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    Pretty good piece, the structure and the flow was on point very well, some okie vocab and some nice details good work man keep it up
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    Flow Was On-Point. . Much Props For That, Made For An Easy Read. . Nice Content, Vocab Was Good, Jus Everything Was Good Man. . Tryin' Not To Be Repetitive. . Keep Um Droppin'.

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    thanx
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    good flow and multis n shit man.. this renminded me of tupacs styule on the real u must be feelin em... really ncie job here man keep that shit up.. peace

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    thanx uppin
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    sleep!
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    damn dis is on da 2nd page?
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    its all good keep it up
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