Uppin #3 - For Votes
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McProfit
cRooklynite
Uppin #3 - For Votes
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Uppin #4 - For Votes
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Can Y'all Vote Please So That We Can Go On To Do More Battles?
We Can Only Do Two Active Battles At Once, The Rules Say.
UPPIN #5 (FINAL) - FOR VOTES
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crooklynite.......dis iz no hate or d/r vote.....i swear..but i say crooklynite took dis cuz.......
structure: CROOKLYNITE(no doubt)
flow: crooklynite
opener: MC
closer: MC
punches: crook by a lil'
humour: crook
vote: crook..........no hate
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe
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Profit you stuck me on that intelligence perserverance non-rhyme
made your flow choppy
Crooklynite nice punches but you have to elevate with more complex verses... You had the better verse in this battle
Vote Crooklynite
Mc Profit, you gotta find somethin else to rap on. Get some better material from this guy.
Crook, yo you gotta bring the fire more. I know you could bring more than that.
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Profit
Elevate, thats all i got to say..
Im not sayin ur that bad or hatin..
Just tellin u that, u should elevate,
I could go on tellin u to work on punches & personals,
& all those other 'catagories'...But..
truth is, u need to work on ur overall writing skills.
You had a ok verse..nothin special..some OK lines..
Overall Below Average - Ok..
Crooklyn
^ That goes for you to..elevate..
But, u had the better verse & upper hand in punches..
..This time.
You where slightly better then Profit, but slightly..
..Is better to..
so..
vote Crooklyn
1 last vote needed, click here to vote & Return the favour..
Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game
My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.
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Crook-ok flow,punches,vocab, not really consistant,ok wordplay
Profit-better puncches,flow and vocab,more consistant
Vote:Profit
please hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post1031365
Well
crooklynite had better structure, even with all the //
He took the following catagories
struc
wordplay
flow
personals
Mc Profit took the followin catagories
meta's
multi's
sust
Overall I give my vote to Crook.
Now gentlemen...It is cordial to vote on a man's battle after he took the time to vote on yours.
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe
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