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    Self-Titled..

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    ima totally fuk this shit up an take advantage so peep the whole thing out...

    aremeggedon dude, empty ya hart in with lids!
    an taking ya block, like greedy kindergarden kids!
    the enforcer, my bio's in greater stamps
    bring ya roster they can get it like th' Violater camps!
    u ain't champs, knifes make ya stomp in ya preme
    then leave on the other side like th' gothika scheme!
    knockin ya team, then..i'll handle ya frames!
    ya'll too easy, ya games crazy, th' cannibals insane!
    man-handle ya lames, put you out on the shed'
    an your girl gave me brains..rippin out of ya head!
    fuckin with us is personal, like a recital attack
    u write in caps, fill my rifle an i typin it back!
    u stupid fucks, u a head when u kissin up cocks
    put 50 in ya, mite aswell call u vivica fox!
    shit on ya blocks, barrels fuck ya face like a whore'
    an opportunity won't knock, cuz im takin ya door!

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    Hmmm.... I cant believe kids slept on this. The wordplay was good, flow was solid......

    Overall, I say this is about a 7.1/10.....

    Nice drop....

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    I agree wit the nigga on top shit was an 8
    boi I don't take dis rap shit serious but I won't resitate 2 stop ya mothafuckerz tat take it serious quick bitchhhhhhh

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    Nyce drop, flow was aight....good punches, but ya betta make sure you name who you callin "stupid fucks" out, cause peeps could wonda.......lol, good drop........try again,

    "shit on ya blocks, barrels fuck ya face like a whore'
    an opportunity won't knock, cuz im takin ya door!"

    best lyne, peace, 1

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    pacaso mac
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    yea dog this was some hot shit cause you used multis. also ya flow was good,ya metaphors the kindergarten kids line was fire, keep it up dog overall about a 8 outta 10

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    It was alright. Wasn;t really feeling it, but you had a good idea. Maybe you just need to extend it a bit.

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    an taking ya block, like greedy kindergarden kids

    That line was hot man.. This was the first text piece that I really liked you got some mad poetential... Nice wordplay and flow was smoothhhh like water... Multi's were sick too man... Hot shit no doubt..return the favor.. Peace

    HollA

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