me n u....
10-20 lines
ill spit first
yall kno tha rules
Northern Touch
Petrafy
me n u....
10-20 lines
ill spit first
yall kno tha rules
aight checking in but give me at least an hour to spit cause I am batelin Bombz right now cool???........................................... .................................................. ..........As soon as I drop my spit on my other battle I'll spit ont this one cool.
I guess evolution skipped, this humans wit//
cuz ya thought cycle is slower den da Earth's revolution is //
ya rhymes R 'played out' like movie scripts //
sumone call his mom cuz I'm about 2 'abuse this kid', I'll smack da stupidness, off ya stupid grin / /
leave u 'assed out like protrudin hips, ya styles more ass then a big booty bitch //
this pussy got alota mouf like thick coochie lips, but aint eatin enough cats like anarexic Peruvians //
Ill have ya jaw droppin in, astonishment, till da floor rocs ya chin //
Im so raw Ill lay in subterranean lava lakes, N benchpress tectonic plates //
till fuckin continents break, my gene pool solidified into a dominant strain//
I'm da personalification of selective breedin, while u developin backwards like a dyslexic fetus //
ya species is part of a regressin genus, I'll splatta ya brains on a mirror so ya actions reflect ya thinkin //
against me u 'ain't got da balls 2 bust' like a severed penis, I'll bring death N disease 2 mics //
hop out in a Grim Reaper guise, N sever ya brain in 2 wit a steal sycthe//
leave 2 of ya cranial lobes on each side, N 'split ya personality' so next time u'll 'think twice' //
aight man there............................................. .........
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Nice spit man...
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Intro....
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I see you don't beleive in the biblical of adam & eve.../
So i'll spit truth spiritual, which will cause you to leave//
RB... Using too big of words you dont understand.../
Hoping I was intimidated that was your plan...//
And it might have worked if your record wasn't four to eight.../
So I'll take advantage of your weakness making the ninth loss to come at a quicker rate...//
Warming up.......
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Not to worry after this loss you can walk with your pride/
knowing you were beat by a canadian the line above was a lie...//
Busting multi's is also easy for me/
Look I just did it by counting one, two, three...//
Cleaning up....
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Your petrafied, shook, and frozen/
Needed an other win and your ass was chosen//
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Anyways Good luck thanks for the battle it has been over 4 -5 month since my last one...
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Dont let this get sleeped on
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uppin#1........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................................vote yall
FLOW: NORTHERN TOUCH - easier to follow but thas just casue it was way simpler, but still he gets flow.
PUNCHES:PETREFY - way more creative and witty, in fact i dont think northern touch had one really good punch
PERSONALS:NORTHERN TOUCH - he did have that one bout petrefy's record, and since P didnt really have any real personal shit northern gets it.
MULTIES: PETRAFY - obviosly rhymed way more complex and just not even in a question who took this
VOCAB: PETRAFY- he used complex words and shit and not typical crap, while Northern had the vocabulary of a 9 year old
ORIGINALITY: PETREFY- it was witty and smart in some parts,good creativity and use of wordplay so of course this too was P witout a question
OVERALL VOTE: PETREFY ..........(not hate, jus honest shit)
this battle has to guy to petrfy
but northern gets those nice props
punches=petrafy
creativity=northern
structure=northern
personals=petrafy
originality=petrify
vote=petrafy
I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress
northern man, you used to be dope what happened ;\
petrafy you took this.. you had better punches and flow.. your punches weren't shit either.. your structure was a lil whack for example long bars.. but other then that you did good..
vote = petrafy
hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101949
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102049
FreeAgent
I give the vote to petrafy.
He had a harder drop then northern touch.
I didn't like petrafy's rhyme structure but it was full of good meta's
personals and wordplay.
Northern had a verse that was too simple and it didn't hav any hard punches.
I think that this was definitely a landslide battle, petrafy was just way too hard for you northern.
Vote petrafy.
Vote here.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101920
I took the time. Now you should do the same.
uppin#2........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................................vote yall
Thanks for your feedback...
It has been over 5 months since my last battle so it was good to drop something just to get warmed up...
Hopefully petrafy will give me a second battle later on...
Anyways keep dropping the votes...
Respect to Petrafy...
flow-petrafy
wordplay-petrafy
personals-northern
punches-tie
consistancy-petrafy
northern u have potential, you have good use of personals but sometimes u get too simple, like the one two three line.. petrafy obviously had the much better complex flow, disses were kinda even.. so between flow and consistancy i gotta give it to petrafy, northern like i said u should throw some punches mixed in with your personals u could hit alot harder, no hate.. vote-petrafy
creativity-730
punches-tie
personals-eh.. not many
originality-carson
disses-carson
730 i didnt know when i came either, apparently the carson/mtv thing is played, i used a different flip also.. but carson came more straight forward with his disses, 730's about rocket ships nice line.. but other than that alot seemed rushed and unthought out.. carson came a little bit more consistant and original so.. vote-carson.. return the favor hit this up we need real votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102040
return the favor peep me and northerns battle
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
i did this in another thread i voted in, i was gonna vote on the carson/730 battle but it was closed b4 i got to vote and i accidently copied the whole thing along with the link to our battle.. accident
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.