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Thread: Aryan Occupation

  1. #1
    snakeyes
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    Aryan Occupation

    The chemical plan:

    Tick tock, this is a anotha drop that makes time stop/
    So I claim my membership to da hip hop, growin like a cash crop/
    no slaves to work for this bloody past, so hard to mop/
    Cant clean the stains of the cockasian, whippin da pavement/
    Superiority is the arrangement so don't get fooled by inocence/
    this aryan brotherhood always been up to no good till da present/
    so many sentences tha make no sense like da amendments/
    only applying to da chosen race, ignoring our presence/
    fishy smell, it be a pestilance of pure evil tha has no fury./
    just like a jury, sentence yall ta death by lethal inject/
    spit a gum and slap it away like mr. perfect in this close circuit/
    i realize dat our existance is worthless like fake pearl necklace/
    thats why south central l.a bred the generation with a menace/
    the flow is short and intence in this city were times is tence/
    i'm out with a shout to da devil, play dat treble, do you resemble/
    the reality in our temple, die anotha day like bond gettn away/

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    You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

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    this was ok.. i didn't like it thats much,, but keep at it dawg. you will get better, just takes time.

    You need to post 3 links to 3 different battle that you have read other wise this would get closed.!


    Peace
    Good Luck in the Future

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    I'm Illy I'm Illy Qui-Gon Illy's Avatar
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    Ok man...

    You have VERY simple rhymes, this isnt bad, but you need to read some other people open mics... try something by sand, or g hod... or me ;-)

    anyways, try to rhyme the words in a way that wouldnt be expected!

    nice peice tho, keep writing...

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