House of Crackers

snakeyes · December 23rd, 2003, 06:40 PM

replied to:
Sand
Liba Dee
D-chillz

Their is a predator running loose in america's 50 states/
blasting his way to da capital, D.C ,wit no time to waste/
he gotta detonate in a point blank range, on top of da stage/
begins to drop da flows like 10feet of snow, killin mr. plow/
with da verbal artillary alternating randomly, pumpin da crowd/
Who be this alien being creating havoc in da white house?/
its da snakeyes fu, and now you know, so go tell someone hoe/
Cuz this is a spit of unexpected shit representing mexico/
the land of the fifth sun, aztec nation comin wit a creation/
top sensation like an american idol, but da bitch is on vacation/
time to step in and show these ignorant people how to get down/
with these funky sounds, smokin everybody out wit an ounce/
keepin da shit alive like dr.frankenstein, creating a monster /
some people may feel this and othas just get wack by a mobster/
yeah, no topic needed to install this thesis, i eat haters like reces/
pieces of shit dat don't peep game, thinkin this flow be lame/
fuckem, they will never learn to understain my methods/
I got all da answers, so fuck yall questions, leave yall guessin/
who was dat magnificent 27 blastin out at capitol hill aggressive/
no, its not your oridanary rapper, or a van damm kidnapper/
its da predator with da eyes of a serpent, fiery burning/
got da house of representatives turning as i start counting/
i be goddam, not a brown or a black man own a seat in this pad/
just a white vote, opinions with no minority hope, so sad/

**Se7eN** · December 23rd, 2003, 07:02 PM

u went off subject like i do alot dawg so keep your shit in focus and work on structure

**Mistral** · December 23rd, 2003, 07:18 PM

This was ok....structure was alright, could be touched up a bit in a few areas though...Vocab was alright, could be up'd though...try working on your multies though, add some to this....flow in this was alright...but overall this was ok....keep at it.

**Endeva.** · December 24th, 2003, 08:03 AM

think ya elevating since ya last couple of drops...jus keep working on ya complexity...internals n multis all the way thru....really set a rhyme off....but the way it is its a decent drop...pZ...