DropZ
Viscosity
Rules:
No D/Q
No Crew (i dont think either of us are in one, but still no crew if you are in one)
No Hate
No D/R
No Wat the fuck your talking about when voting
Break it down, no 2 line posts saying 'its dope' then abunch of line fillers
You spit first
Lines: 10-Up
No Recyling/Biting
This is my check in
peace
Ment to say:Originally posted by Viscosity
No Wat the fuck your talking about when voting
Break it down, no 2 line posts saying 'its dope' then abunch of line fillers
KNOW Wat the fuck your talking about when voting
not "no"
im checkin in but i gotta get off tha comp ill spit in a 1hr or less
aight~??????????????
peace out
bb on soon
ight hurry the fuck up
I got shit to do... lets get this over wit nigga
peace............................................. ..............
wat the fuck get ur verse in
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iight heres my drop.......
I got to much momentum movin in my direction to lose//
Im a missile on cruise Ill leave more than a body bruise//
Viscosity's dues are well overdue pay it be4 the beat concludes//
I tracked his rap record back to when it began took 2 secs to scan
Bunch a garbage its probably not far fetched to say//
His shit locked in a trunk wouldnt last a month let alone a day//
Dont fear god Fear me Ill bring upon death faster than hiv//
let alone the herpies disease that was passed by you last week//
Ill wrap ya naked ass with a sheet of broken glass ya gashes//
Are filled as soon as ya hit the pool full of acid//
Viscosity's philosphy is"Dont give death ill bring it upon myself"//
He needs no help to ridicul his fuckin self R&B gave him a charter
and RV so him and his partner can get thier fairy asses as far//
as ten thousand dollars across the country//
I told this newbie to beat it he stepped up and kept competing//
Featured now as my side show roady i got his so whipped//
He carries a over sized leaf and totes me where i please//
Fuckin cunt pussy ass chump ya can lock us both up w/ one mic//
And you can have it cuz ill still tear ya up worse than lotto got from rabbit//
you can drop ya shit now and i see you are online so c'mon damnit~!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im sorry i took long but i cant get to a comp that easy
this is bullshit hurry tha fuck up man ya goddamn pussy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
ight.. sorry for the wait i was gone
yoyo,
I embarass you like wen ur lil cock up in a speedo'
Do shit legal, or illegal, I bust ur ego
So go tell all ur people, I break those that are feeble
I rose higher in this battle like the rome steeple
Makin eye colors faded, he logged off for 2 hours, then hated
Its irate-aint-it, look he used 8 Mile charcters in his verse
A hurse is ur next visit, Drop... THEN POP
Cause i aint given u time for a rest stop
Im lyrical-insane, I got a few Xtra Y's and Z's in my membrane
Im surprised you havent switched ur Y's and I's, BYTCH
Critical condition, cuz this battle aint bout start, or middle its the finish
You know you aint wnna fuck wit me.. ~~
Ill put more holes in ur ass then a lesbian org
I carried the wackness, but now i deleted and its all phatness
Soo i give u the wack-torch to continue - shouldnt be to hard
Its right up ur alley, 5-0, someone fuckin keep-tally
Cuz not even a Rocket-Rally, could save u.. in-grave ur tissue, cuz its over...
pz
ment to say 'lesbian orgy'...
upppppp
goood battle get the votes in
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uppin fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
upp god damn't stop fucking sleepin
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u not talkin to me r u??
UppiN2x~!~!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
last time uppin cuz i got shit to do tomorow peace
o ya good battle man
!~!~Uppiinn3X~!~!
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ok heres the breakdown....Both were ok battles But here it all is!
Complex:dropz
structrure:both
Punches:both
Personals:dropz
overall vote=dropz
yeah the personals got this shit yo Hey up my battle its being slept on people! one more vote to close it HONEST Opinoon though none of that 1 line shit!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97328
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