Thorn VS Cryptic Thoughts (Obviously ILL)

[Born To Kill]

Man...

Tough, tight battle...

I know I've seen that "rainbow/gay pride" line very, very recently...

I remember reading it, like yesterday, cuz whoever dropped it used a different colored font for each word in the sentence.

Shame on you, Cryptic, for that semi-bite.

Great spit from both, though.

Gonna have ta give it ta Thorn, though...

Thought he had the better personals and punches.

Flow, Complexity, Wordplay...
All about even, they both came strapped.

To me this was punches and personals and lines like this killed Cryptic and brought about his first loss...

[I]"This gameis mine in all faces like completed Rubik's Cubes..
Cleansin the RB Herb Garden? An excuse for battlin newbs"

How much harder and personal can ya get?

Props to both.

Peace

[Da_Legend]

ight, dis is what i like to read, good battles

crypt's opener was jes decent, the clock/throw back in time type shit ive heard times b4

i liked da deadlines line it was nice, and crypt had a nice closer

he fell off in few lines but had some good punches goin around

I liked the italic line and digorno line from thorn was nice, really liked da italic line tho

porno line was straight, not a bad closer

structure = both
flow = both
multis = none
punches = thorn
creativity = thorn
wordplay = crypt

vote = crypt

[Da_Legend]

hehe fucked up, i meant to put

vote = thorn, ma explanation even cleary says who i was gonna vote for, i was typin too fast

[melodramah]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88025
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can yall vote on this shyt plz ... needs to be done

[$pitacular]

No punches, It'd be a miracle even if ya hands connected
Difference is I rise to the occasion, You just stand corrected
^^THAT SHIT IS HOT, FUCKIN GOOD OPENER, BEST PUNCH OF BATTLE
I'm dangerous duke, i'll shove a clock through ya spine
Its still the present, but I just pushed Thorn back in time
^^NICE, SOMEWHAT PLAYED
Thorn just some net slime, facin me to get your head fried
Thorn is like Due Dates, nothin live, just some deadlines
^^LIKE THIS ONE
Misplacing your flow... Slut you have none
Even thought I'd give you your first loss... But you had one
^^WEAKEST LINE
Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists
^^MAYBE TRYIN TOO HARD HERE
Beat you into all colors of the rainbow...To prove ya gay pride
I'm elite bitch so take this KO... And get this thorn out my side
^^EH...


A Weak Punch Flowin Fillers, Like Light Weight Boxers wit Cavaties
Ur Lines were more Gruesome Than Old Wars faught wit Cavalry
^^EH...
This Game is Mine In All Faces, Like Completed Rubix Cubes
Cleansin The RB Herb Garden? An Excuse for battling Newbs
^^EH....
This Kid is Out of Date, like Mullets and Intetional Cow Licks
Cryp Knew the battle would Lean to 1 side so Posted in Italic
^^SWEET, SECOND BEST PUNCH OF THE BATTLE
He cant Believe My Delivery, Like its Ovened Pizza Digorno
Ya lines are More tired than Couples Shootin Old Mature Pornos
^^WEAK
Just as I expected, Talkin about Guns Shows you Lack Creativity
Kid Being Bad Isn't Considered not Participatin in School Activitys
^^NO....
'Keyin Up my Loss Now", Thats what this Bitch Actually Wrote
Know how he's 16-0? Three words..........Warlord Crew Votes
^^NICE CLOSER, ALMOST ENOUGH TO TAKE THE BATTLE


Vote goes to Cryptic, just more consistant, but both had nice punches, props, both yall are definitely Elite battlers...

peace

[$pitacular]

oh yeah - peep this when you get a chance.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87402

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[Lethargic]

Cryptic's Verse

No punches, It'd be a miracle even if ya hands connected
Sifference is I rise to the occasion, You just stand corrected

1st line was eh and slightly played, second was nice

I'm dangerous duke, i'll shove a clock through ya spine
Its still the present, but I just pushed Thorn back in time

1st line build-up, 2nd line was good, woulda been great if you worded it better

Thorn just some net slime, facin me to get your head fried
Thorn is like Due Dates, nothin live, just some deadlines

1st line filler, second was decent

Misplacing your flow... Slut you have none
Even thought I'd give you your first loss... But you had one

Okay....second was nice, lol

Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists

1st line filler, 2nd line's dope, lol

Beat you into all colors of the rainbow...To prove ya gay pride
I'm elite bitch so take this KO... And get this thorn out my side

1st line's played, second was weak...weak closer

Good verse overall...a couple played lines, but all in all it was good.

Thorn's Verse

A Weak Punch Flowin Fillers, Like Light Weight Boxers wit Cavaties
Ur Lines were more Gruesome Than Old Wars faught wit Cavalry

1st line's played, 2nd wasn't too hard hitting

This Game is Mine In All Faces, Like Completed Rubix Cubes
Cleansin The RB Herb Garden? An Excuse for battling Newbs

1st line eh, 2nd was nice

This Kid is Out of Date, like Mullets and Intetional Cow Licks
Cryp Knew the battle would Lean to 1 side so Posted in Italic

1st line bleh, 2nd was decent

He cant Believe My Delivery, Like its Ovened Pizza Digorno
Ya lines are More tired than Couples Shootin Old Mature Pornos

1st was gay. 2nd was nice, lol. Coulda been worded better though.

Just as I expected, Talkin about Guns Shows you Lack Creativity
Kid Being Bad Isn't Considered not Participatin in School Activitys

1st line bleh, 2nd line...no

'Keyin Up my Loss Now", Thats what this Bitch Actually Wrote
Know how he's 16-0? Three words..........Warlord Crew Votes

1st line sucked, 2nd was hard hitting

Decent verse, but you need to word your lines better. Your opener consisted of a ridiculously played line. That doesn't help matters. It was a pretty decent verse though. Just needs a little refinement.

Overall it was a close battle. However..

Punches - Cryptic
Originality - Tie
Structure - Thorn
Flow - Cryptic
Opener - Cryptic
Closer - Thorn
Enjoyability - Cryptic
Wordplay - Cryptic(Close)

Vote ~ Cryptic

[LM]

Yo I thought just about every category was even except punches and personals. I gotta give those to Thorn. He just came harder and that's what won the battle.
Vote = Thorn

[Richard Parker]

thorn got banned.... so crypt wins . this shoulda been in elite either way. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

The Fuck?! Thorn Got Banned AFTER This Battle... Chrit Doesn't Get The Win Automatically Now That Thorn Is Banned... You Know How Many Battles We Would Have To Change If That Was The Case?
-Axe