APRENTICE vs. Crip"--t or w.e

[CRYP'][']

ok dont worry just spit, ill drop after u dont worry, just hurry up drop before 5................................................. ....15 minutes i know u can do that shit

[Aprentice²]

no prewrittin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

[CRYP'][']

LOL what r u talking about I wasw dun a while ago, i told u 20 minute time limit dawg, then we'd both drop at the same time

wuts the matter wit u?

anyway heres my verse, know you'll enjoy it

Punches u Throw r nuthin, arm ampitated MLB stars Tryin to Pitch/ Its Mostly all real emcees On rapbattles.com, cept for this bitch/ I'll take you out unexpectedly like assasins on a roof top/ have ya runnin faster than fat couples monday mornins at I Hope/ yur nuthin, ill torture u worse than mid evil dungeons, puttin you out "the game for good" like "5th stage concusions/" Ill fuck you up more than a joint thats been laced/ your a discrace, U couldnt spray SHIT if u had an ass actatched to ur face/u probably never even gotcha penis sucked or experiended a Lover/ Ill hitchu wit my punches so hard, you'll Spin around n' Hover/ Ur defenseless like Natives tryin to Defend they own Lands, Ur shits broke like little kids makin money off lemonaid stands/ My words are so Explisit, more Illegal than Teen Pary Kegs/ IM guna end ya Win RUNNIN streek like troops gettin pegged in the leg/ the difference between me and u is a While/ Ur so low you'de need a fuckin Stool just to lay Floor Tiles/ Im Psycho like Straight Jacket Patients, Wit mind voices who Hate-It/ Like girls "given head", after this loss ur guna have to "Face-It"/ U gettin removed like routes and ploud like a Farm Trackter/ THis fags seen N' Squeezed more nuts than a ball crushen Nut Cracker/ This battles mines, like a crook wen it comes to purses im about to Snatch-It/ Ur jus slopply, bound to "fuck up", replica "Inspecter Gadget"/ (always messes up)

[C_Drama]

its an okay verses, some parts seemed forced and some bars strectched out into two

for example
Ur defenseless like Natives tryin to Defend they own Lands, Ur shits broke like little kids makin money off lemonaid stands/

that can't be one bar duke and btw, its best to write yer shit in bar format than like a paragraph

lot of ppl like to see flow and hate to be the one that have to decipher your flow by re-reading, it should be obvious at start

neways, when the battle starts i'll vote on dis ish

[CRYP'][']

it sounds better over the mic

and dont judge this battle over flow i hate when ppl do that

haha apprentice is still not done yet