Man, shut the fuck up!
Man, shut the fuck up!
it's hot... i love the cocky attitude it reminds me of me
Thanks dogg...
YO SON THIS SHIT WAS HOT, FLOW,VOCAB,MULTIS WERE ALL THER. I LIKED THE SCHME TO.
YOU CAME HARD ON THIS NIGGA. GIVE A 8.5/10.
YO CHECK OUT MY OPEN MIC AND DROP SOME FEEDBACK,THX.
PEACE.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...493#post952493
Fuck....good piece...v.good piece....bladow!!!!....Wordplay n flow etc on point like a webcast elvis impersonator..ILL
Thanks dogg. Anyone else gon' hit this up?
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Yeah....
I like to see people actualy put more than 1 verse and a chorus up on RB, I mean id never do it....But anyway....
It was a good piece yeah..There was some parts were i lost flow due to change in syllable count...But that didnt change the wacknes dopeness thing at all......
Whats allso good is that allot of it was a ME ME ME song....But it didnt sound corny...It sounded like it pulled off really good....
I liked it because it showed that peeps can sometimes say that their the sickest MC without soundin bigg headed and corny...
Nice...
Peep my shit man...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103384
ArcBiggEZ
Heavyweight Penis Crew
nice rhyme scheme
flowed nicely
good vocab
8.5/10
keep droppin dis was a nice piece
BEST OF YJ
Holla at cha Boi
Watch Me
Eyez of a Young Nigga
Can't Forget yall
Luv sick
I can't Believe It(RIP Denise)
9/10
flow was thier an so was the vocab an creativity point...
nicley hit.......
could be flowd well on a beat....
Omg
Cot Dayum
This Was A Really Dope Piece Maybe The Best I've Seen From A RB Emcee Thus Far.You've Got Talent,You Should Most Def Record This On Audio.This Must Of Taken You Awhile To Create,Cause The Structure Was Near Perfect.Just Up The Vocabulary A Little Bit
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Thanks.
It took about 3 hours to write and to get it to flow right and shit.
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