phiXion Vs. Blacksash

[phiXion]

10 lines, no more...no less

no crew hate or dickryda votes

Blacksash spits first.....

goodluck

[Blacksash]

check in
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[phiXion]

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[phiXion]

[Rape'N This Kid]
"Anal stabbing" is the only "punch technique" this little "bitch-has-mastered",
Mind block? Naw i'm leaving this kid "lost for words" like "script-less-actors!"/
I'm "bending your mind", stabbing your brain with my "pen" now I see "stress-at-this-point",
Ima rip "your shins off", use the "remainder of ya leg" and beat you to "death-with-a-JOINT!/
Leaving "dents in your skull", simply because im "hard", its my "fist-this-guy-met!",
I'm like a "surgeon with Parkinson's disease", coz this bitch getting "ripped-by-this-VET!!"/
Lets "play a game", but dawg ill go first and its called "defeat-the-newbie",
Ill battle you with "sandpaper on my hands" so I dont "beat-ya-SMOOTHLY!"/
I aint gay though, sorry to ruin your "plans", I just spilt "RED" blood all over your "blue-print",
I have a solution to your "played style"..You're constipated thats why you cant spit "NEW-SHIT!!"/
[Rape'D This Kid]

Goodluck with votes.... peace.

[phiXion]

Okay, where the fuck are you kid....post.............................
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[Blacksash]

Rap:

This phixion fool need fixin/its his girl friend i be rinsing /

this fool aint a kat he jus a kittin/his talents dont even include pre writtin /

this fools home just a kitchen rag with a stick/no need for bull dozers you can just kick/you even sell your mum for money but she aint worth a flip

he the herb pimp/looks like a lyrical chimp/found by the rspca without a hip/he lucky if his mum cook him a chip /

Murked you are learn you will/that you shouldnt lie about your home town it aint phil/all it is is a street a broken condom and no pill

considering you have 10 pints of water a day you still cant spit/you even eat the lyrics you bit/time for me to penertrate your girl friends clit

bitin and you cant prewrite/this aint a kids game it aint like flyin a kite/trust me you dont wanna start a fight/now i left you black and blue you know im write

(finsher)
i know your shitten your pants in fear/i herd you have a part time job with ikea/and your dad always raped you on brighton peer

[phiXion]

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[Baron Mynd]

Vote - Phixion

Better wordplay / punches / flow just an overall better verse in my opinion, other kid needs to shorten his bars and work on his lins, make them more creative cause a couple were played.

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[phiXion]

Thanks for the vote man.....upz....................................... ..............
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[brainsurgeon]

punches/disses - tied
personals: ---
wordplay: p
complexity: p
vocab: p
creativity: p
metaphors: p
multi's: p
flow: blacksash

Originally posted by phiXion
Ima rip "your shins off", use the "remainder of ya leg" and beat you to "death-with-a-JOINT!/
Lets "play a game", but dawg ill go first and its called "defeat-the-newbie",
Ill battle you with "sandpaper on my hands" so I dont "beat-ya-SMOOTHLY!"/
I aint gay though, sorry to ruin your "plans", I just spilt "RED" blood all over your "blue-print",
I have a solution to your "played style"..You're constipated thats why you cant spit "NEW-SHIT!!"/
[Rape'D This Kid]

[phiXion]

thanks for voting...................................up....... ............
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[phiXion]

up#3........
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[Sir Cedrych]

i think phixion got this by his punches and wordplay

no hate vote

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[Cory Stylez]

Originally posted by Camarac
Vote - Phixion

Better wordplay / punches / flow just an overall better verse in my opinion, other kid needs to shorten his bars and work on his lins, make them more creative cause a couple were played.

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cant put it in better words

[phiXion]

thanks for voting...uppin for 2 more votes...................................
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