Se7eN v.s Corporal

[Se7eN]

U spit first
12 lines or more
no hate or crew votes

So spit dawg

[Corporal]

no feeding
30 Minute deadline
(These rules were agreed to in Bitch Slapped)

ok....im checking in within 30 minutes i will have dropped my verse

[Se7eN]

iight, spit ya shit dawg and any MOD close the otha battle between me and Corporal please, iight pz out*******

[Se7eN]

r u gonna spit time is up*(********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ********

[Corporal]

yea but 1 thing...no more than 12..i no it says 12 or more but that'll make it unfair as i dont no how many ur droppin so i dont no how many to drop..verse will be in a minute

[Se7eN]

k juss 12 lines********************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** *******

[Corporal]

HaHa..this dude thinks he stands a chance...with a rhyme scheme that resembles Paragraphs from books the way every long ass bar got so many syllables in it...naa jokin dawg no hatin..here...jus beatings...believe..i HATE to do this to you...haha


Low Posts but I Slow Roast this Next dude..gonna be a Vet Soon
You only 'Lay in wait with Clips' fuckin the guy who rolls with the Neptunes
You Suck Aint No Lucky Seven its Useless Throw in the towel Powell
Cos You Spit so Much Whack Shit you must have Emptied ya Bowel

..12 or more hmmm..i think you gonna do more...so ima get a little harder...to end you...


They Must Be Talking bout ya Body..if they say CORPS on the Floor
Gone need Life Support for this Whore When I Draw For the Four
too Raw for this War..no Need for My Chrome to Leave this Guy Blown
Cos my Punches gonna send him flying in circles like a CYCLONE

..whats the point dawg..i spit first..you prolly gonna murder the limit but whateva


Im Iller than the Champ himself..this herb aint gonna Grow when im planting shells
you aint got a chance in hell so ima kill you wit Too-Mour like Cancer Cells
I Box Fools you not cool..you aint gettin any brighter like kids who drop school
An you gonna need more than a Tissue to wipe ya nose when Shots Block ya Nostrils

[Corporal]

complain about me not posting then disregard the limit yourself?!?

please hurry up..i was rushed then you get extra time..thats poor

[Se7eN]

iight ayo, ayo,

Dawg, you think your name's hot, I'll shoot 5x in the same spot/
And embarras u worser, then when i heard u shoot blank shots/
Dawg you opened up nice, for a bitched out home made wife/
So I'll kill ya like we're playing clue, wit my rhymes, not a knife/

You ain't gonna shot block me bitch, you must be lyrically sick/
I can understand that shit, since I notice u have no balls or a dick/
Percent of you winning, is like your mom's breast, their thinning/
You can't keep up, wit all the shit that I keep pinning/

United kingdom, u represent, a place that only makes a dent/
I can tell your probably a poor white kid, who worshipz 50 cent/
I give a fuck about u bitch, shit u might as well make a wish/
Everytime I see you post, I can see, taste, and smell fish/

[Se7eN]

up voting x1 ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******

[CarsonJetX2]

personals- 7
flo- 7
structure- tie
wordplay- none
multi's- corp
meti4- 7
overall- 7....not by much tho.....pretty close....elevate both

both**hit this witta honest vote...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102207

[Corporal]

They Must Be Talking bout ya Body..if they say CORPS on the Floor

wordplay- none

hmmm....

hahahha

Hilarious

[CarsonJetX2]

hey...some one just made my bitch list!

A better explanation....jus read the new voting rules.....

wordplay- none....my feelings are bad wordplay in essence is just as bad as no wordplay.....corporal...stated he had wordplay...correct u did....but it was pathetic....

punches- 7 came more direct...less rambling...more cut to the point...makin it stronger...

flo- 7's flo was better simply because his structure formatted his verse better....not as streched....

now u can say all u want- corporal...its an honest vote...*1*

[~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~]

7 got personals ,punches , flow and metas so that pretty much wins the shit

vote:7

vote on this....

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

[Se7eN]

your turn 2 up votes Corporal****************************************** ************************************************** ***** *******