D-Dizzle
Bazzy
10 lines MIN-MAX (Short but sweet)
No dickriding/Crew/Hating votes
EXPLAINED votes BEFORE POLL VOTED
You spit first
Try and have ur verse in as soon as possible
I'll TRY to have it in when I can
If Im a LIL BIT late dont worry
You spit first
Your up now
Aiight bet...
ja..ja..jeah
look
Bazzy you done fuck up now kiddo with your plea I bomb fist
I sic enough to 'serve my past oppoent's body parts' so you can 'feed off my verse' (vs.)/
Takin' your minimal force of punches, no fear in my onslaught on this hoe
Cuz Dizzle 'can’t back down'..like 'You Ming doing the limbo'/
This mu’fucka prolly be pitchin’ for votes, sellin his rhymes thinkin’ he good
Like a 'roundhouse by matadors', he 'goin around kickin that bull'/…
But you false advertising, duke, this guys rhymes wack in the biggest since
Now Imma 'blast on this joker' like 'drive-by’s on Jack Nicholas'/
You a hopeless cause, facin’ Da Prophet causing snot boxes to rock you shook in fear
I’mma isolate the spectators and 'roc mics' like 'Iverson his rookie year'/ --- yes I roc 'em that sic, ha
it's nothin'....
Bitch Im the illest,you wastin' your "energy" if you tryna be "hotter"//
You dont get realer than me,and you just a fictional character like harry potter//
Im that globe trotter,stamples and crushes you like a skinny twig//
Thinking you gone blow up going round actin' like a mini-big//
Keep talkin' bitch and I'll swing a punch leaving you blood-covered//
Shocking each and every one of your nerve cells like the time you discovered//
That your lines should rhyme,but I guess the meaning didnt get to your brain//
Cause "Hollowness" and the bashing on your skull got you writing in "vane"//<--(Vane/Vein=Bloody)
And in my first elite I already got you tattered and verbally beat//
Challenging me,a crazy thing cos when you compete me your better to ask for defeat//
Aigh,Uppin votes
nice battle ya'll
was feeling parts of both verses
punches from D came off better in my head....
bazzy... that vane pun was real weak... that one lost it for ya in my head
vote- D
AI
iight bazzy had some iight one liners.... but you lack the heat and the hardness in ya punches.....they to simple....disses were iight
Dizzle hit you nicely from all angles.....his wordplay was nice....like the Ming line.....nice one
vote Dizzle
aight this was a good one, and second, bazzy u ripped that harry potter line off of me, cept mine sounded a lot better. D dizzle came with fo shizzle flows, i gotta give it to him
"You a hopeless cause, facin’ Da Prophet causing snot boxes to rock you shook in fear
I’mma isolate the spectators and 'roc mics' like 'Iverson his rookie year'/ "
/\ hotness!! Philly baby!
bazzy came a lil weak on thsi oen, idunno how he got his recored to be 8 citories with verses liek that, D took thsi oen mo punches n all
Vote=D, didn't come too hard but overall it was much better than the other kid, they were heaps corny lines man, like the Harry Potter one, gotta word shit better....Vote= Dizzle...Peace....
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LMFAO......Ok its 3-0................................................. ............. .......................
This guy is 9 years older than me though....so he obviously has way more expierence....but its performance not age..............................................U ppin votes
yea this was easily dizzle, but yo dizzle u forgot to poll vote on this ish
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=44729
gotta have'em in the polls
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Originally posted by Bazzy
This guy is 9 years older than me though....so he obviously has way more expierence....but its performance not age..............................................U ppin votes
aiight den this is a wrap 3-0.......uppin for the last time, yo Baz i didn know how old you where I didn't care to look but I figured you had 8 wins for something...but you showed your age with that Harry Potter shit and some of the other lines, you kinda messed yourself up before you got started. Make sure you put me on that list of cats you lost to, K.O. too
^^well........you didnt beat me yet
On the rules 3-0 was not a KO so you have to get 5 votes on the poll to win
2 more votes ya'll uppin............................................. .................................................. ......................................
Vote: Dizzle
Bazzy came a little weak in his verse...
Dizzle had some decent punches.. mostly the ones quoted above
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