huh
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i liked it, good piece from a chick anyways, was deep, had feeling.
i liked ur piece--it was from the heart
it was 1 of those dat u hadda xperience 2 catch da flo tho
it was diff how u used "bitch" but i got it & its tyt u can b comfortable enuff with urself 2 use dat term--PROPS
don't trip bout J.Christ cuz he left sum fucked "feed" on my piece 2--OBVIOUSLY he all talk...
Nywayz--dis the 2nd piece i seen from u and i like dem both
Def keep postin' -k- mami?
& yeah, bet it would sound str8 Audio.
Chk my OM & return the fav, i'd appreciate the feed for real.
Gracias!
-Mari
"Letter From A Ryder"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=270190
thanx ma'...Originally Posted by lady_Desiree
i cudn't think of a title so i jus wrote down anything... stil its cool....1
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wdf... was that feed???Originally Posted by *TrEeZy Da Gr8*
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bway if ya read it properly u'd no... it werent meant 2 be anything HOT get me.. but yeah cool feel free 2 say wha u like.. i ent trippin..Originally Posted by J.Christ
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thanx for leavin feed anyways.. & oh yeah i no i'm not from south.. wdf's dis female bullshiit... ah anyway fuk it w/e ....1
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j i get cha... j christ is only Minor" yep that defines him...lol..
muweed- u shouldn't post in my threads!!! *spanx* lol
larone - cool...
& mari thanx for leavin decent feed.. yeah i'll go check ya piece out aiite...1
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Shit was hot but I think it would be better in audio so that we can hear the emotion in your voice cuz just readin it doesnt do it justice. Got a beat for it?
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yeah tru it duz soun better in audio cah u can hear tha emotion in voice n shiit.. yeah i got beat for it stil.... but i might put it up wen i got it dun aiite.....thanx fo feed dow...1
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say main the best thing bout ya verse was its structure it made me wanna read it
I was reluctant when i said “lets go our separate ways”,,,
We argued & moaned so much, we had our separate says,,,
Led 2 no enjoyment, ‘cep 4 more heart destroyment,,,
& non of us had da decency 2 stop & think for a moment,,,
that was my fav part in your verse it was good
9/10
aiite thanx reapa... stay up......1
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