wanna be gangsta never said I was a gangsta I'm white pussy bitch.......come bring it I've given my address out come get me......
wanna be gangsta never said I was a gangsta I'm white pussy bitch.......come bring it I've given my address out come get me......
If you wanna die, fuck wit me...............BITCH
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diss wasnt bad but it wasnt good..in da middle it was
strucutre and flow wa sa bit uneven and choppy..
but, the rhymes and multies were pretty nice..
topic was aight....overall this was a descent peice
just keep elevating man..you got some potential..
this piece was crazy. I could follow the structure. Had good mutils, and had a storyline that went throughout the whole verse. Its a perfect 10 in my eyes.
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