Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
vs.
nuttin
v/D
/v D.Zaster
D had an ight verse compared to Assassin's verse, which was completely horrid. Ass came ass, with stretched as fuck lines, played or weak punches, and basically, absolutely nothing. D didn't come good but didn't need to. "I's" line won this thing for him.
Pz
this was an aight battle, here's my breakdown
flow: definatly D
structure: D
wordplay: neither (no wordplay whatsoever)
metaphors: D
vocab: assasiin
overall: D-good flow, that was the best thing in you verse, work on wordplay and thats it, assasiin, your lines were streched, hard to flow, not very enjoyable because you didnt really directly diss your opponent, try to add some wordplay and metaphors in as well
v/D.Zaster
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You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
vs
nuttin. step ur game up kid.
v/canna.
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
b00m
that there was coo
rest wasnt great
vote zaster
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Well yeah.
The I`s line was the only on i tried on.
I knew his shit was weak.
And you fucking fag, taking the A.I sig outta your sig.
Pfft at you
v//Canna
Itz pretty obvious he won
LMAO! @ that kid making a line about putting his pubes under your nose
<<The real Renegade
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
vs
nothing
V/ D. Zaster
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
vs. nuffin
v//d.zaster
D.Zaster
took this easily
Assazin, this aint RV Kill that shit
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
d.zaster took this one.. his punches were much harder hitting.. and his structure was much better than assasin's.. assasin had alot of stretched lines which made his structure bad. d.zaster had better wordplay also. so for those reasons my vote is for d.zaster
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
^Beat Assasin.
V/ D.Zaster
Vote D Zaster. Both assasin and Cannabars came with some good stuff, but Cannabarz took it light on him and did enough to get the decisive victory in my view. Cannabars used better disses, but both textees were very good at delivering solid disses...
Another wack battle..
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
vs
Nothing really.
V/D
YO D. nice you TAKE this battle......................UNANIMOUS decision.
FUCK YA'LL HATERZ................TALKIN SHIT let me see you FAGZ STEP UP TO ME AND BATTLE................FUCKIN HOCAKED NET THUGGISH HOMOS.
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