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lol.. This piece was the funniest one that I have read in a long ass time.. I mean the whole thing is about the size of your cock.. The way you glorify it is just funny as hell.. You mos def got the readers attention and that's pretty gay because its a bunch of guys reading how big someone else's cock is..
That shit was wack what the fuck was you thinking but still it was kind of funny i guess
ROFL...i didn't realise that...Originally Posted by Beacon
uppin for more feed y'all...thanks for alll the feed.
After thinking about this, it gets me mad...
I offer a challenge to any woman who thinks size matters. And I'll make you cum with my small pee pee.
If I lose, you can give me a blow job.
If I win, you can lick my anus.
*awaits challengers*
ay yo thanks for all the feed everyone...if you feel like droppin more...feel free...bumped
i was impressed by your choice of words in this.
the best part about it was that i could connect with it well
10/10
i thought that shit was very funny
i like how at the beggining u put *drops pants and picks up mic*
very original man 10/10 for sure good job
the best line by far was "i got enough jesus juice to make a catholic church drown"
great job
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thanks for all the feed...bumped...
ummbump y0..last one.
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after reading this i felt gay for a moment..or two.
i had vivid images of every line i read.
it was funny no doubt.
but damn u for making me read about soebodys else dick.
rofl.
don't even ask about my sperm count, even the doctor's nurse found
i make enough jesus juice to make a full size catholic church drown
lmao.
holy shit.. that was one of the funniest pieces i have read... lol.....
don't even ask about my sperm count, even the doctor's nurse found
i make enough jesus juice to make a full size catholic church drown
lmao^^^... best line yet, you had good structure, 100% original, nice multis here and there, good wordplay, thats some good shit..... nothing really bad except tht pretty much only guys have read it haha... newayz keep it up and leave feed on this>> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=211777
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O mY goodness!!! THats just crazy talk, I've never ever ever heard of anyone pieceing together an OM this good about thier penis... lMFAO *deaded*
seriously tho its a good piece, its freakin' incredible...
Good job Sl!ck
Battles:
Come and get it.
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upping.
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lmao marv i thought you sucked at texting
thanks for proving me wrong this shit is funny as hell and doesnt sacrifice humor for flow, originality or wit.
great piece son
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