man that shit was crazy ur flow rhymes it was alll there
man that shit was crazy ur flow rhymes it was alll there
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loved this peice the story behind it was strong and the rhymes 10/10
Upping for some real harsh down to earth comments and critics...UPP!
wtf, the feed on this piece wouldnt have helped you to improve on anything!
well first off, leave feed...make it worth while so the artist can learn and improve on this piece...and i thought that seeing as this was inspired from a nightmare (so you said).... you must have been dreamin or thinkin bout some deep shit....
the structure wasnt bad, but i had to re-read some parts so i didnt get confused about what was hapnnin.... i did get the rest of the story tho, and the abortions part was made very clear, and u placed strong statments on how you were feeling... the multi's were ok, but at times... i noticed the flow a lil off... rhymes was good tho, and vocab was pretty well thought out, keep droppin man...elevate on this piece..good drop
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ah tight shit good flow, structure all 9.5/10 it was an awakening for you dogg keep da om's comin
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