ok trying to get it right this time
Genocide`
Dr.O
ok trying to get it right this time
here it is
puttin up a little bit of fist don't rock da tide
in one hit u figure out your on da wrong genocide
self defined, yo name is my scheme, what is this?
lay ya out face down drinkin the dew for sustinants
ruckus from the bars I spit or use to split skulls
don't amount how his ass gets pumped like gas at Citco
you tip toe like pimps hoe tryin to skip a payment
let GENO when I deCIDE to squish this bitch deflated
even though he stated that no ones gave a beating
i'll kill with keys from A to Z, leaving finger tips bleeding
Dr. O, I'm about to drop this ho.... and
Tip your weak ass over like dominoes
Here's somethin' to suck on... but not what's in your avatar*
Why you on this site when your nightlife's the faggot bar?
You ain't got pills that can cure my sickness
Imma murder this herb.. with this site as a witness
I'm ill when I spit this.. your rap is wack and twisted
If they made a dope rapper forum...... your name would be blacklisted
Your drugs suck... best believe "I'll D.A.R.E to Sha-no"** (say no)
Fuck Halo... you gay ho... you just got flattened like Play-Doh***
*He has a lollipop in his avatar
**TrueShano=Dr. O's AIM address
***In his profile it says he likes Halo
.. and all the pills/drugs/sickness/ill lines were because of his name.. Dr. O
Uppin' this ish... word.
I don't see the reason to break this down.
genocide had harder punches, better flow, vocab, personals.
dr.o it seemed like ya were just rhymin had a couple disses but they were weak
citgo line was probly ya best n everythin else sucked.
vote-genocide
DQ'ed
-'Merge
Last edited by Emerge; December 14th, 2004 at 02:55 AM
I can't vote, but I think the verses were close. Genocide's verse was aight, but I feel his disses were wack. Dr. O's punches were hard to understand . Their flows were good overall, but the rhyme schemes were simple.
Uppin' # 2.
Dr.O: 1 decent punch, 1 quite good punch but the rest were fillers though. Decent flow, nice multies but I didn't like the fact that it got weak towards the end.
best punch
"self defined, yo name is my scheme, what is this?
lay ya out face down drinkin the dew for sustinants"
Genocide: I thought overall you came harder in your punches and you took this battle despite him having the better flow. You came more consistent in your punches and I'ma have to hand this to you.
best punch
"Your drugs suck... best believe "I'll D.A.R.E to Sha-no"** (say no)
Fuck Halo... you gay ho... you just got flattened like Play-Doh"
vote/genocide
Dr.O...
puttin up a little bit of fist don't rock da tide
in one hit u figure out your on da wrong genocide
Meh...weak.
self defined, yo name is my scheme, what is this?
lay ya out face down drinkin the dew for sustinants
No punch.
ruckus from the bars I spit or use to split skulls
don't amount how his ass gets pumped like gas at Citco
No, wack.
you tip toe like pimps hoe tryin to skip a payment
let GENO when I deCIDE to squish this bitch deflated
No punch.
even though he stated that no ones gave a beating
i'll kill with keys from A to Z, leaving finger tips bleeding
No punch again.
Genocide...
Dr. O, I'm about to drop this ho.... and
Tip your weak ass over like dominoes
No punch, self glory.
Here's somethin' to suck on... but not what's in your avatar*
Why you on this site when your nightlife's the faggot bar?
Ok.
You ain't got pills that can cure my sickness
Imma murder this herb.. with this site as a witness
Self glory, no punch.
I'm ill when I spit this.. your rap is wack and twisted
If they made a dope rapper forum...... your name would be blacklisted
Decent.
Your drugs suck... best believe "I'll D.A.R.E to Sha-no"** (say no)
Fuck Halo... you gay ho... you just got flattened like Play-Doh***
Meh..
Overall, Genecide came better off because he had a few ok punches. I prefered the flow of Dr O though, but it is the punches that win you battles, and Dr O didn't have any. Both could do with cinsistant punching elevation.
v/ Genocide for better punches.
Animal, can you poll this shit?.. word.
I have polled...
Good battle to both gents......
Dr.O, u had the vocab that was okay and a lil bit of creativity........but the punches were lackin a likl bit but u did throw some which is always good. U should work on ya rhyme too u had a line ro two in there that didnt rhyme at all....but okay verse.
Genocide, good verse......u had some good punches and creativty but the vocab wasn't all that great....work on ya vocab and u'll be straight.......
vote=Genocide for harder punches.
Battles:
Come and get it.
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Originally posted byr.O
puttin up a little bit of fist don't rock da tide
in one hit u figure out your on da wrong genocide
NO THIS WAS WEAK
self defined, yo name is my scheme, what is this?
lay ya out face down drinkin the dew for sustinants
HOW ABOUT NO
ruckus from the bars I spit or use to split skulls
don't amount how his ass gets pumped like gas at Citco
DON'T KNOW WHAT THE FUCK CITCO IS BUT OK
you tip toe like pimps hoe tryin to skip a payment
let GENO when I deCIDE to squish this bitch deflated
YOUR BEST PUNCH
even though he stated that no ones gave a beating
i'll kill with keys from A to Z, leaving finger tips bleeding
MEH CLOSER
Originally posted by:Genocide
Dr. O, I'm about to drop this ho.... and
Tip your weak ass over like dominoes
THIS IS A PLAYED OPENER,PLUS I USED THE DOMINO LINE AGAINST DAEDAL IN A DIFFERENT TWIST THOUGH. IT'S ALL GOOD
Here's somethin' to suck on... but not what's in your avatar*
Why you on this site when your nightlife's the faggot bar?
WEAK PERSONAL
You ain't got pills that can cure my sickness
Imma murder this herb.. with this site as a witness
S.G. PLUS IT WAS AIGHT
I'm ill when I spit this.. your rap is wack and twisted
If they made a dope rapper forum...... your name would be blacklisted
BETTER
Your drugs suck... best believe "I'll D.A.R.E to Sha-no"** (say no)
Fuck Halo... you gay ho... you just got flattened like Play-Doh***
HMMMMM...
V/Genocide
for comin wit way more decent spit and harder punches
favors already returned thanx
DQ'ed
-'Merge
Last edited by Emerge; December 14th, 2004 at 03:32 AM
This can count as my fourth up or whatever.. but, so far cutastraphe, Demon Pyrokronix, MC Animal, def by mouf, and Assazin have voted for me.. but there's only three votes for me on the poll.. so whoever didn't poll it.. can you hit it up?.. word.
Aiight, this is my last up. Someone vote on this... word. Will return the favor, just drop a link.
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