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Thread: Mind Spoken [feat] ELEETE

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    Mind Spoken [feat] ELEETE

    ELEETE
    I can't escape through the pen, my thoughts are trapped
    I'm havin a mind collapse throughout my cerebral tracks
    Is it something I lack? Or is it just that I'm wack?
    Or is it cause im better than many who're afraid to face facts?
    My brain's paralized, no movement in my glarin eyes
    Like a petrified, frozen synical hectic mind
    I'm ready to let loose for no one to notice my skill
    Continue being unknown, but never destroying my will
    And keep doing whatever it takes to be respected
    The respect I've deserved for so long, but forever neglected
    My talents always been rejected, never accepted
    Never met the expectations of what others expected
    So what am I supposed to do? Bow down to you?
    If I did I'd be hypocritical...an wouldn't be true
    You are all the reason I was split into ELEMENCE
    Cause according to you ELEETE's flow was always irrelevant
    But ill strive an continue in any way to express my self
    Ill make others listen...even though I remain in stealth
    Ill go through hell if I have to, just to say what I said
    Fuck it I've spoken my mind, the rest ill leave up to Dev

    Dev
    The grain of paper is flavoured by the pen
    Yes…Its written but misunderstood by the standard men
    When will it be recognised by the average flame
    1 in 10 …yes… are blinded by the lyrical drain
    Its too free ranged…why?… the tempo is quickening
    Its untamed… the listening is too raw to be fitting in
    Like a clot on the brain… but once ya really hear, it’s sane
    Not insane… ya got riffs, bass, keys, loops, all the same
    Yes, the concept remains… it’s the audience that changes
    Like different stage names… some this and some not
    That’s why im rhyming this simplicity… for the Indi lot
    Ha ha…rather!… this is to the toff’s…
    But hip-hop’s the father of the expression lit youth…
    Its real raw… don’t understand?… well that’s just profuse!
    No…it may not conform, but my content can be related
    Cos in turn if ya can fragmentate it... it’s not created
    That’s why my words are a struggle, no doubt… underrated
    Cause a tussle… well… to those who think they hustle
    That’s why ya can’t tell by the outer plated… it’s jus muscle
    So I really fly, it’s just novice readers!… their skillz deflated
    My vocab, flow, play, is coined… the greatest
    …Lol… nah… but like Ali the rap has made it
    I’m spitting it proud… so, blah… yes now its tainted
    So all in all, its allowed… makes simple men creative!
    Ya can’t debate this…no… my spoken mind portrays this


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    Last edited by Endeva.; February 24th, 2004 at 10:37 AM
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    Hmm....
    Nice piece...
    Eleete did better than
    i thought he would...
    Dev also did dope job
    Nice flow, good wordplay

    Beginning was strong..
    Stayed pretty good
    throughout the whole thing
    Props...
    Keep it up...


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    damn...one of your nicest eleete in my opinion...great wording and rhyme flow throughout the piece...pretty dope overall...

    dev...yours started off a little slow but it picked up and flowed nicely...nice message and delivery...keep em comin...

    Hit up my open mic in my sig and/or battle...thanks....pz

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    ^^ appreciate it yo! ^^

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    Nice drop from both of you..i think with eleetes feeling and dev's imagary and way with words made this piece hott..It was a good read, had a better then average in every category lol..Stay droppin fire to both of you..
    ~1~

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    Nice drop from both of you..i think with eleetes feeling and dev's imagary and way with words made this piece hott..It was a good read, had a better then average in every category lol..Stay droppin fire to both of you..
    ~1~

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    I agree this was a nice peice here....Both of you came off nice in this....both of you had good vocab....i liked the content in both of the verses....I liked the way ELEETE opened up his verse, i thought it was good....and Dev ended the piece good as well...overall a nice collab, enjoyed the read.

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    ^^Thanks^^

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    Eleete - Tha flow was... whoa... it had one of tha best flows on this board so far, tha word'n was pretty dope... I felt this verse G, tight work... 8.5/10

    Dev - Didn't come as hott as Eleete, but ur verse was still hott, loved tha wordin', and I dunno why, but I felt this line - 'The grain of paper is flavoured by the pen' if you had a multi to go wit that, it would of been hott... 7.5/10, no hate though cuz, this was pretty hott

    Overall - 8/10...

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    I appologise for this, but, i only read Devs piece....

    This was a good read my man..Your structure was well put together...(Really diffirent to the battle we had in SS)

    I enjoyed it..Your topic was the kind i preffer...

    Ohhh and by the way....=) That SS thing in your sig is real nice...Itl look lovely in my sig tho...Pink Font and all...lolol....

    Anyway, Peep my piece Breh.....
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    Blah...Atleast a UK cat holds it...lol...
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