BombZ vs. J*Miles

[BombZ]

10-15 Lines
No D/R
No Crew votes.
I'll spit first...

[BombZ]

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Search n' Destroy to murder you with what I'm packin',
once deciest they seek but ya' vanished as if you was bin laden//
Envade enemy lines as if I was bush, I do so because like weed, ya' easy to push//
Easily conquered, couldn't place me to the side if my flow came awkward//
Ya' dealin' wit a man laced with hatred, who you couldn't dodge the emits I spit if you was in tha matrix//
Learn the basics, couldn't stop my rage if you was rated 'out-rage-this'(outragious)//
Got ya' shook cuz you's like a boring book, I skip the pages//
Who the fuq made this? Your game is as pre-mature as a movie rated "all ages"//
Styles be so lost that the changes will loose admenments,
Cuz BombZ see's no future glory, but Miles of Sad endings//
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[J*Miles]

Commin wit ya strech lines and my name bolded once thinking ur gon win//
wit no personals Its obvious this nigga bit that why my name sits at tha end//
Put holes in ya chess infront of ya feet is where ya heart will lye//
This nigga is from boston so I’ma remake the massacre u first to die//
nigga force so much multies It look like theres rape talkin place shit bizarre//
Cat talkin bout weapons of mass destruction wit a grenade in his avatar//
It’s like playin dodge ball wit a gun cause your dead quick in this game//
Bomb is no emcee he thinks he gots destructive flows because of his name//
This muthafucka is whack been on tha site since june and is still not recognized//
This nigga is not bein seen like dudes is lookin at this nigga using biggies eyes//

[J*Miles]

Uppin 4 votes(1)
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[TheUnderRated]

heres the vote and the breakdown...
punches- J miles...came harder your shit was to abstract there BomBZ next time just fuck him in the face...
personals...J miles had more personals that stood out to me as far as that is concerned..
flow...J miles wins again cause your structure is kinda Fucked there BombZ work on that..
multis- BombZ no doubt nice multis ...you should try more multis J
opener-BombZ.... it was alright but J miles should of come harder
closer-J miles...biggies eyes nice...
overall J miles...don't forget to poll your shit J if you think i won peace out to y'all good battle..

[J*Miles]

thanks for tha good,solid breakdown.........................

uPPIN 4 VOTES............................................. .

[Chemarim]

vote:Bombz

why- he had better flow cuz jaes was messed up in the closer
better vocab

both had even punches jaes was played and the reason why bobz took it was because of his vocab

good battle

hit up kautious vs explicitot

[J*Miles]

what eva happened to personals,structure,wordplay, dawg next time u vote plz break it all the way down.......................................

[Freeman]

first off....

both of ya ditch the italics and colours.....u dont need to 'do up' ur verses!

jus write it normally ppl.....

id sayyyyyyy

bombz had a beta vocaba and flow

a didnt really understand sum of J's lines

vote - Bombz

no hate..............pz

laterz

[BIZ.VICIOUS]

Opener=J*miles (he spoke tha truth)
Closer=J*miles (altho, could have been better)
Flow= J*Miles (by far, it just sounded cleaner)
Personal=J*Miles
Punches=Tie
Structure= J*miles (that small text fucked me up.)

Vote= J*Miles. Nice battle.

[J*Miles]

bout time shit gets broken

Uppin 4 votes(3).......................................... ....................................

[TheProphet777]

heres the breakdown No hate votes Honest Opinion....

Opener:J-miles
Closer:Bombz
Complex:bombz
Structure:Bombz
Flow:bombz
Personals:bombz
Punches:both
Overall Vote=Bomb

Ok thats the break down.....please up my battle also its slept on guys! no hate.....



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97328

[BombZ]

uppin for some more votes, please don't sleep on this people, honest votes!............................................ ..............

[Anotherlevel]

bombz u battled a beginer an i think he got you
Vote=J miles
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[BombZ]

take your thinkin' in a another post, your vote does nobody good here, especially when you're 0 for 2, anyways... UPPPIN FOR SOME VOTES PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!1