10-20 lines...no time limit since i know you dont got the internet at home...check in and do your shit when your ready
Dropz
Nyte Fire
10-20 lines...no time limit since i know you dont got the internet at home...check in and do your shit when your ready
checkin in................................................ .................................................. ...................................
i'ma go ahead and lay my down J
Dropz drop what? I'll drop a load on your chest
Out of the rappers in school you may be the best
Your lines outlast the rest, when you rap everyone stay
Just to hear the lyrics of a white boy that cant get laid
"Fuck your parents", "Fuck God", why don't you just say
Fuck everyone it doesnt matter cuz at the end of the day
Your lines dont compare to the ones that I lay
"Beyond Pissed"? the truth is this, your beyond bein
verbally dissed beyond slittin your wrists beyond a lot of
things I could list
Your not the only kid who came from a broken home
Beaten and left alone, self esteem in the danger zone
Addicted to gettin lifted to ease the pain of the abuse
Gettin low grades in all your classes, usin ADD as an excuse
Dont take this rap personally though, I just let my rythym flow
and my words come naturally like a big ass comes to J-Lo
dat shit was not all dat tight but lets see what the other dood has to offer
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Go head taunt me bout bein adhd and scrawny//
Put me down push me pussy just to make ya look better//
Bed wetter emcee better check what bed ya in//
I think ya just pissed in michaels bed again//
Forget usin complex words this homosex checks//
his sexuality on a regular basis basically hes as//
Parallel to that kid that got fucked by Michael//
At his Neverland mansion on his carasel//
Iight herb loosen up and elevate ya verb use//
Ya cant beat me at this shit so quit and call truce//
ya never be famous so quit talkin bout getting j-lo and her anus//
and start working on critiquing and twirking ya structure//
Stop fantasizing bout J-lo cuz ya neva gonna fuck her//
not tha greatest
iight dont sleep on this one.... ikno i checked in late but i dont got internet at ma house uppin fo votes
c' mon peepz uppin 2x!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hate that damn text thing i have to type this shit so i can post
c' mon damnit need some votes on this one uppin3x~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
this was truly a newbie battle, neither came hard, both lacked
punches, drop had a weak opener verse, and barely rhymed,at least he had betta disses
nite seem to compliment dropz on his first bar, did'nt feel his
verse at all, was'nt even a battle verse, both need to elevate
a lot
vote drop for effort
dam! shit sayin session invalid and not lettin me vote, what tha deal$$$$$$
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Aiight...........
Da Breakdown
Nyte:shyt was weak,flow was aiight,punch's were corny elevate more!!.......
Dropz:dis too was weak barely dissed alls u really did was feed off of what he saidtry harder next time!
aiight......
Nice Lines.....
Dropz-didnt really like ne of dem!
Nyte-same here
Opener-dropz
Punch's-tie(both were weak)
Flow-nyte
Structure-dropz
Vocab-dropz
wordplay-nyte
Closer-dropz
Overall-Dropz
Vote-Dropz
I feel both verses were weak,both need to elevate n try harder!!........i guess dis was an ok battle!
0n3
dropz took this one
better wordplay
nice vocab
better punches
better closer
the other dood had some tight shit but dropz took this one
HotRod vs Matt Dillon
HotRod vs Mc Nookie
votes needed thanks
iight uppin4x dont sleep on this 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
Da Breakdown
Nyte:shyt was weak,flow was aiight,punch's were corny elevate more!!.......
Dropz:dis too was weak barely dissed alls u really did was feed off of what he saidtry harder next time!
aiight......
Nice Lines.....
Dropz-didnt really like ne of dem!
Nyte-same here
Opener-dropz
Punch's-tie(both were weak)
Flow-nyte
Structure-dropz
Vocab-dropz
wordplay-nyte
Closer-dropz
Overall-Dropz
Vote-Dropz
I feel both verses were weak,both need to elevate n try harder!!........i guess dis was an ok battle!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98906
^^ HIT IT UP>>>>>ITS MY FIRST BATTLE IN A FEW MONTHS^^^HEAT
iight last time uppin fo votez~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~
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