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Thread: Phuture Courses w/ Aisle Five

  1. November 27th, 2003, 11:32 PM #1
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    Lightbulb Phuture Courses w/ Aisle Five

    Aisle - followed by Avah.

    Seemingly The only ones here, Were These among the first creations?
    And bones have been collected, Yet their still lacks a foundation
    Condemned underground, And the skeletons are deemed weak and brittle
    More and more info is discovered, Originated from something so little
    Sacred scriptures- In the midst of confusion A Bible gets ressurected
    In the Eye Of God, It was the presence of Our Generation he requested
    Income Wrong Ideas... As Picasso Paintings are the first discovered
    And if there are no words, How shall they comunicate to their lover?
    Technology is at their feet, And they know not the uses of a plug
    All of Man is wiped out, Now How'd you survive I ask the petty bug
    They're getting stuck, All these possibilities but still no answer
    Digging up so much Data, But Were Still Stuck.. And Now My Hands Hurt

    Acronyms - currently cherished on the splendid side incredibly
    Why celebrate life's devices which tend to emphasize its brevity?
    Fucking silly; new life forms sigh & hope to relieve their patience
    Whilst cracking our lingual systems to decode abbreviations
    Corrected spiels, neglected deals make way with hectic squeals. .
    For an arrival rivaling Fifty Cent's. ._ That is, in his respective field
    They'll land in an instant - in troughs that will corrode our plights
    Onlookers trash ex-scientists as we scoff at so-called prototypes
    Unbalanced as ever, the future looks to be an invalid endeavor
    The field's short of experts; think you're rounded and clever?
    Heed advice, pshh - never listen, you'll miss the skies, arresting me. .
    & the ideas I hold; go ahead. .























    Keep trying to simplify complexity
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  2. November 28th, 2003, 12:02 AM #2
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    Mother-freaking Replies

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    I'll edit two more tomorrow, but I'm quite fatigued @ the moment . . Take my word for it.
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  3. November 28th, 2003, 12:04 AM #3
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    I'll edit this with two more replies. Don't sweat it.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94169
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...727#post942727

    Yawn...
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  4. November 28th, 2003, 01:24 AM #4
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    this was a dope piece
    everything went nice
    keep droppin'
    7.8/10
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  5. November 28th, 2003, 03:24 AM #5
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    Nyce one guys i recon it came alltogether well i'll give ya 8/10


    Aight Peace
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  6. November 28th, 2003, 05:44 PM #6
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    OVERALL I CAN ONLY SAY DAMN REAL NCE WORK
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  7. November 28th, 2003, 06:06 PM #7
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    Flow - Didnt fall off at all, so thats good
    Vocab - You added some really good vocab in there.
    Multies - Didnt see to many, but its straight
    Allusions - Pretty good with the allusions
    Imagery - Very nice imagery, good part of this flow.
    Rhyme Scheme - Simple, but it didnt fade the eddectivness
    Topic - I felt you were expressing your mind, so thats a good thing. You didnt say the topic. But I understand what you wrote.
    Rateing - 7.5-8.0 / 10

    Very good drop hommie. Stay up, and keep elevatin.

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  8. November 29th, 2003, 12:32 PM #8
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    Uppin.. don't sleep on a G.Hod and Aisle 5 collabo!
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  9. December 9th, 2003, 10:34 PM #9
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    Haven't upped this in a while. .

    Uppin.
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  10. December 9th, 2003, 11:33 PM #10
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    shit was hot flow was good vocab good punches ight mutlis good wordplay ight over all 7.5-8/10
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  11. December 10th, 2003, 01:01 AM #11
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    damn A5...i take it back your not that overrated

    dont i feel stupid

    p.s. nice job here, in my eyes it takes alot to roll with G. Hod and you did well

    *smacks himself*

    stupid, stupid, stupid...

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  12. December 10th, 2003, 06:03 PM #12
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    Hmm ... Im guessin' this been up a while but this is my first time seein' it ... Dope job from both of you ... Very nice collab ... Nice concept too ... Both of ya'll had dope verses on the concept ... I can't really say one was better than the other in this collab cuz both of ya'll dropped sickly ... Keep doin' ya'lls thing ... Peace

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  13. December 10th, 2003, 07:24 PM #13
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    Nice job fellas.
    Aisle, nice way to start the piece off. Your structure is good, but thats something that you need not worry too much about, it just helps making it easier to read. The way you presented your thoughts, your writer's voice, and the amount of implied metaphors made your verse a nice read.
    G.Hod, everything I have read from you has a certain level of complexity. Sometimes I need a dictionary. Your vocabulary is definately off the shizzlebulb...(...) Your closing line was incredibly dope, and topped off this wonderful read by both of you. Nice to see something good in O.M
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.
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  14. December 10th, 2003, 07:38 PM #14
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    damn boys, dats some shit, don't think i blinked once during the read, vocab, flow, structure all amazing, if i can find one thing to bitch about its multis, you had rhyme continuation but the multis wern't there, but everything else made up for that easily. topic was insane too, that little piece at the end, trying to simplify complexity was ill too, damn...
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  15. December 17th, 2003, 03:39 PM #15
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