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TheUnderRated
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Better than YOU.
chiggity check microphone check one...chiggetry check microphone check 2... chiggity check microphone..check three...check game from the notorious compton G...
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
You givin me 20 lines is addin to my weaponary....
elevated by design, aiming to hit? up your trajectory...
The mindstate drops weight on ya cause your a characta....
think u sealin my phate but your looney tunes gonna embarass ya...
3-0 compared to 0-1 what you think'll be the outcome..
greedily steppin to an MC deity and i wanna how come...
sit back next time relax read my shit but don't try...
my skills flex the Bi chokes your ass till i pop out your eye....
were now to the halfway marker like where your at in elevatin..
keep goin i ain't hating when you get there i'll be waitin...
you throwing punches with no arms so just looks like your convulsin..
fucking hitting with small arms my nukes are brought by jet perpulsion..
I annihialate MC's burn the Microphone to there skin..
busting since b4 creation so really where do i begin...?
You might beat me my journey is hardly begun iron lung..
come hard when you meet me or get in the gurney son...
blame Canada its too easy all you do is smoke Pot..
herbheads where's your medal poor snowboarder forgot..
fuck an hour i spit quick its just part of my style..
but take your hour G i smile knowing i left you beguilled...
explo- drop weight on him like looney tunes..then i used it to describe his rhymes in the next line...also the bi pop out ur eye..popeye stickin with the cartoon character theme..
Canada- in the olympics when they took that dudes medal away for marijuana use he didn't know where it was and it was around his neck..lol..
the UR = underRated = my name...cool
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
I'ma hype this paragraph by jump'n this kid like bunnies//
cuz you couldn't type a pair-of-laughs if you went and told 2 funnies//(1)
So get serious cuz I'm gonna pull your card like the dealer//
the only peeps fear'n ya, are on your blvd. cuz yous a squealer//(2)
no one under-rates you, they just don't see any potential//
that's why my mind will sedate you, I'm like an A&E Monumental//(3)
Peeps gonna be vote'n on this shit, wonder'n why you agreed//
40 minutes an I wrote this spit, with 20 left open that I didn't need//(4)
I'd even post first, so you can get taste of what I'm feeding ya//
but even with a close verse, it's still a waste cuz no one's reading ya//(5)
U. R. an American citizen, stand up for what you believe in//
I don't care how shit has been, put my hand up, cuz I'm leave'n//(6)
declared this a win, you must admit it, and you ain't even spoke//
like stare'n in the wind, and you try to spit, but instead you choke//(7)
In the end when you lose this, hope you understand that rap ain't your game//
and don't make no excuses, like the krap that's in your name// (8)(under-Rated)
cuz who's the Rap critique? Can't be you, cuz your a rookie//
I saw your style, and you bit it, like in your battle with MC Nookie//(9)
Never under-estimate, no matter how much skill you got//
cuz today I ended Under-Rated's fate, after ya blood spills......you rott//(10)
Better than YOU.
That was a nice verse U.R. very nice!!!!!
Votes Please............................................ ......................
Better than YOU.
this was a nice battle i can't vote but if i could underrated would get my vote
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yea should be a good battle lets get some votes i got love for cncuk he came a lot harder than i expected nice drop...
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
thanx for the love hot rod you can almost poll break it down anyway just to get used to voting it'll help you in the long run..one love vote vote vote..
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
opener: Tie
closer: canuck
punches: canuck
structure: tie
vocab: underrated
wordplay: canuck
overall: canuck
aiight nice battle, but
PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS SEEMING AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO VOTE ON URS, THANKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99299
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hehehe alright thats fine.......thats the first vote somebody got against me...too bad it seems like he just wants vote favors.. its all love thought uppin for votes..
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
uppin this for some real votes now c mon its a good battle vote on it plz thanx alot i know the verses are long one love...
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
man that shit was tight .. its a hard vote but it would have to go to underrated .................................................. ............................................
Damn, looks like this is gonna take awhile. Please, if your a newbie, and you can't vote in the poll, at least breakdown the vote, so everyone on the board can elevate.
Peace...... Yo U.R. check your PM's, and hit me back...
Better than YOU.
hhee well thanx for that opinion i appreciate it..i hope i can get some poll votes that would agree with you... one love keep postin..
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
I dont think it was a favour...
...I'm prob the most honest voter
here so I'll hit it up
Breakdown------
Punches-Canuck..both ya'll had fillers but he had less
Stucture-Under..stop usin // Canuck
Flow-Both
Metas-Canuck..held it better
Sustainment-None
Enjoyment-Both
Vocab-Cauck
Overall-Canuck..took more categories
MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PZ..SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99336
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