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    The Agency (Assignment: Aragorn)

    The Agency: RB’s new form of policing the masses.

    Your mission, if you choose to accept, is to eliminate a nuisance going by the name Aragorn. He has no skill to worry about but should be taken down with extreme prejudice.

    Only with Bush on your finger, could you have a voting ring
    Now lets go, let’s being, start to finish, here’s the Origin


    Origin
    Aragorn been playin wit big rings..butt..his finger got stuck
    It’s like him text battlin..his ass always gettin finger fucked
    Us sharks eatin ya muscles now ya flow got crabs from ya girl
    Savin up cock-L's..only means ya gotta start eatin the shells
    The agents still shine..even tho we merk this bitch in shades
    Damn..ya styles so elementry..its got us feelin twice our age
    Ya recs addin ya battles..hard times show it equals ya wack
    Aragorn gettin in my hair..only reason imma take off my hat
    Bilbo’s packin his bags-in cus this stretched trilogys..done
    We throwin ya ass at the screen..so ya in character..and run

    Agency tends to hold weight, like we are wresting submissions
    Even if you ever get the basics, you’re pinned down by Technician


    -Technician-

    Yo.......Aragorn?...........good?........lmao..... ......RIIIIGHT......

    Aragorn..........You lie gay talkin shit while i just stand straight
    Blowin army guards is the only way you'll establish a fan base
    You should mess wit dictionaries ta learn to play wit ya words
    Cuz bitch you couldn't spit sick wit a mouth-full of milk curds
    Speak alotta shit you no vet, 9 and 9 i already hit your chest
    I drag queens in'a game'a chess, to show you the way you dress,
    You should just slap crap, cause frankly faggot ya shits whack
    I Usually obliterate spines, but for you let's just say i cut back
    You kinda like Benzino down to his Last buck and Last resort
    and RITE-ly ya skill is like midgets trippin', always fallin' short

    Your rap future is bright, thanks to our power surge
    your fame receded to darkness, if it wasn’t for Emerge


    ...::ËMËRGË::...
    Aragorns forlorn just an abortion that was "still" born
    Old pair of jeans played and worn...easily ripped & torn
    Even on my worst day pen thirstay I manifest your limits
    Odds of 'cuming' close to me something like porn Chritics
    Quit it...got no chance...in the way of my train of thought
    Aragorns a deer caught in headlights...cross haired & shot
    You're under-mined cole n find nothing but dicks intwined* (colon find)
    I wine & dine serving you line for line yet you don't mind
    Therefore you don't think...flinch or blink your brain dead
    An unplanted seed or a masterpiece that hasn't been painted

    You claim to have your tapes presses by a street team
    but even bootlegged you will never be at Speek.E.Z.


    Speek.E.Z.
    Destroy Aragorn, The Newbie King Of The Front Lines..
    You Whack, Judge Your Skill And See It's a Played Line..
    Spit Against The Agents, We Make This Unknown Famous..
    Let You Win Your First Category, And Title It Lameness..
    Compare Us To HB Pencil, The Way We Pumping Lead..
    Because If Aragorn Keeps It Up We'll Leave Him Dead..
    I'll Give You A Chance And Leave This Line As Filler..
    You're Like A Whore We Fuck You Up Then Bill Her..
    Watch How The Agents React That's What Friends Do..
    Peep Your Clap Back, To See Nobody Spittin Wit You..

    When I point you listen because you are obliged to
    Cause just like the actor you both Eye Ques


    EyE QuE
    Aragorn, please shut your mouth, you got beef with a whole team of hievens
    And you believe your skilled, look at your record, your just barely breakin even
    You bitched down in your own call out..
    how ya gonna back down from wogsta??
    I got so many personals on you...I pmed everybody aragorn talks ta
    Hey i'm glad you got a crew now, even if it is just an artificial family
    You already knew this, but you never stood a chance, like one hand poker gambling
    I called you out weeks ago, and you still din't hit me up with a positive response
    Show some respect?? Get some hair on your chest...ur more used up then Arial fonts
    Your finished you said the wrong thing to the wrong group of people
    After this you'll be hangin high and dry seein the light like Jesus on a steeple

    Music stops
    Door opens
    So glad you were able to stop by and help out on this. It is not often I ask to activate retired agents but this was a concern to you as well as me.
    Not a problem, he went and made it personal.
    Music starts again


    Your prayer for forgiveness sounds like it’s from a church recital
    But even if Cam burned your bush, you were not prepared for the...


    13th Disciple
    Aragorn?!...u fallin victim to the power,fake ass Lord Of The Ring...
    ...ur late wit ur Blockbuster tape cuz u aint Return Of The King....
    ^ur sig...now heres the thing...Realist tellin me u talkin some shit..
    ...callin Regime overrated...when ur rating status doesn't exist...
    bitch...now the Disciple has to step in & exorcise of ur demon...
    ...leavin u fucked...but...ur not even worth the waste of my semen
    while keyin..lookin at one of ur verses...u really shown skillz in....
    ...the punches being ur strongest.....AFTER these first ten...
    Originally posted by Aragorn
    Yo I see why you bitch ass nigga's keep calling me out. Ya'll wanna say you fucked with another member from DOI.
    I laugh at you dickryding faggots though, with your lil aim lists a fucking mile high. What the fuck make you herb ass youngsta's dope? NOTHING. Maybe a few props from the vets around the site but what the fuck does that mean? You nigga's got anything out on the street? Shit. Hit me with the e-mail address and I'll burn the fucking tweeters off you radio with my new mixtape that is flooding the sacramento streets. I know sac isn't L.A. but you cats is coming from third world countries and shit. I'm from the U.S. and not just that I'm from CALI bitch.
    Served

    Case Closed

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    dope drop gus u fucked him UP

    sorry i couldnt be in this but i was told too late and i didnt get the time...

    keep merking cats....the best i felt was 13th

    Pz...
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    i was waiting for this to drop.

    turned out really well, u guys all put it together nicely....

    i liked how it was formatted with the little quick bar inbetween each person.

    worked really well nice job.


    check this if ur bored..its another open mic diss

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99353
    A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E

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    Dope..
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    Next..?
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    I wuz feelin this nice hits by everybody, the drag queens croos boards line wuz sick.lol i dont know who this was about becuz im new to this site, but whoever u wuz talkin about they shitted themselves by now,

    PS read and CRITIQUE YOUNGNUT NEW SHIT

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=98681

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    daMn whats With All the Disses....But I gotta say this One Worked Out Well Yall Work Well Together aye...every ones strucutre was nicely done.all ya Flow was Good Work.....ya All followed Nicely........Just it was hella Long But Eh it was a Good Diss All Round And Fo Yall u Participated In this FUCK ARAGORN.......P.€.a.c.€.......

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    Dang this ended up D, oh, pee, and E...merge


    lol this was fun...we

    all structures were consistent...sept for eye-que


    peace

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    This was an awesome collaboration.... you shouldve pm'd me to diss him too, little bitch is a week late for my battle with him

    i give this 9.5/10 on the whole.... a different mixture of styles, clashed together well... some of the lyrics and disses were clever and put together well... the vocab worked and the punchlines were great....

    I guess Aragorns RB life is over :P

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    nice work i gotta say.....every had some funny ass disses.....and the 13th Disciple was a nice surprise at the end....u all stay on topic...had nice structures...funny ass lines.....so here....i'ma quote the best line from EACH emcee....

    From Origin:
    The agents still shine..even tho we merk this bitch in shades
    Damn..ya styles so elementry..its got us feelin twice our age
    Ya recs addin ya battles..hard times show it equals ya wack
    Aragorn gettin in my hair..only reason imma take off my hat
    ^^haha...elementary line was tight.....hair line was creative...u lacked in vocab and multis though...nice work overall..

    From -Technician-:
    Speak alotta shit you no vet, 9 and 9 i already hit your chest
    I drag queens in'a game'a chess, to show you the way you dress,
    You should just slap crap, cause frankly faggot ya shits whack
    I Usually obliterate spines, but for you let's just say i cut back
    ^^lol....even though chess lines are played...i gotta say that's possibly the best way to put it....nice work on wordplay.....even though u recycled the fan base line....u did a good job....but u also lacked in vocab...but u had a tad of multis....

    From ...::ËMËRGË::...:
    Quit it...got no chance...in the way of my train of thought
    Aragorns a deer caught in headlights...cross haired & shot
    You're under-mined cole n find nothing but dicks intwined* (colon find)
    I wine & dine serving you line for line yet you don't mind
    ^^lmao...colon line was tight.....and deer line was good...u had some nice metas throughout ur verse....and good multis, flow, vocab, and structure......i think u topped 2nd in this collab next to 13th...good job i gotta say...

    From Speek.E.Z.:
    Spit Against The Agents, We Make This Unknown Famous..
    Let You Win Your First Category, And Title It Lameness..
    Compare Us To HB Pencil, The Way We Pumping Lead..
    Because If Aragorn Keeps It Up We'll Leave Him Dead..
    I'll Give You A Chance And Leave This Line As Filler..
    You're Like A Whore We Fuck You Up Then Bill Her..
    ^^whore line was tight....category line was pretty good....u had some good lines...but no real stand out hits....but u did have multis, structure, and flow....good work from u duke

    From EyE QuE:
    I got so many personals on you...I pmed everybody aragorn talks ta
    Hey i'm glad you got a crew now, even if it is just an artificial family
    You already knew this, but you never stood a chance, like one hand poker gambling
    I called you out weeks ago, and you still din't hit me up with a positive response
    Show some respect?? Get some hair on your chest...ur more used up then Arial fonts
    ^^good work with the personals...i think u had the best personals in this collab...u had a good vocab....a nice flow...ur structure was kinda...bleh....u had pretty good metas....and nice disses.....good job man...

    From 13th Disciple:
    Aragorn?!...u fallin victim to the power,fake ass Lord Of The Ring...
    ...ur late wit ur Blockbuster tape cuz u aint Return Of The King....
    ^ur sig...now heres the thing...Realist tellin me u talkin some shit..
    ...callin Regime overrated...when ur rating status doesn't exist...
    bitch...now the Disciple has to step in & exorcise of ur demon...
    ...leavin u fucked...but...ur not even worth the waste of my semen
    ^^lol...looks to me like 13th still got text down...u had some funny disses...a kinda weak vocab....good flow....nice metas....good personals....a pretty good structure....overall i think u were the best read in this collab....good job...

    BREAKDOWN (who won best in what category)
    Structure - Origin & Speek.E.Z.
    Vocab - EyE QuE & ...::ËMËRGË::...
    Punches - 13th Disciple & ...::ËMËRGË::...
    Personals - EyE QuE & 13th Disciple
    Flow - EyE QuE, -Technician-, Origin, Speek.E.Z., & 13th Disciple
    Consistency - All
    Multis - ...::ËMËRGË::... & -Technician-
    Overall - u all did a great job.....as u can see ...::ËMËRGË::... & 13th were the top two in my opinion in this collab......u all threw nice punches and disses.....nice metas....good flows and vocab....the only thing u lacked in a majority was multis and vocabulary...good work from u all though

    Rating:
    9/10

    peace
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    i gotta say thought this was a nice diss ppl.....nice contrast of styles i thought...but yet linked well.....thought i would get bored on reading so much on the same member, but nah...came good....pZ.....i bet he loves it...lol
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    Dayme...i missed out on this piece....
    but ya'll came nice as fuck...
    everthin looked clean but it was
    dirty as hell...
    Ima down for the next..pz

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    ^^^^^ripped......................SNAAAAAAAPS


    hahha

    aragorn a thorn in every RB vets side
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    while you write to rapbattles I perform on stage

    How's it feel to lack in comparison?............

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    Originally posted by Origin
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    amd just to clear something up
    all the 2 line introductions were my lines

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