TheUnderRated vs. MC nookie

[TheUnderRated]

10-12 lines
blindspit
20 minutes
no crew/hate/d/r
checkin when you ready 1...

[TheUnderRated]

lets go nookie c mon onow check in don't do that no show shit on me....i hate that lets go i wanna flow like a river to a ocean .......hmmm

[MC Nookie]

sorry bro. i am at work at the moment. pretty laxed, but i do get stress moments. i'm sweet now but............................................... .............

[TheUnderRated]

ok you got 20 spit it in 20 np i understand work...this is how i work son so put in work one and best of luck ...

[MC Nookie]

this bitch is about to get sizzled and popped
kids never ripped or killed with glocks,
thinkin hes hot with Mickey Mouse socks

getting his chorus from the Source,
this poor ass bends Benzino.
with force like porsche, and coarse with taunts,
i'll maul this dork send me votes.

never tasted pussy, like Nookie, inducin the rootin
just a wasted ass rookie, imputent youthful newbie.
go back to you wack rappin on web sites,
then we might just see how much was right on this page tonight

[TheUnderRated]

quit playin hookey Nookie in Mc elementary you suck..
hence da name, such a rookie, farms teams won't pick him up..
get up off the mat not one punch i wanna torture his ass son..
grip him in the vice of my mic,and spike what he sippin on..
420 crew smoke weed, but leave hip hop you clownz...
real clownz came to town and from the crowd the laughter sounds
cause its a joke 2 fuck with me like bitches suckin horse dick..
only the dope can buck with me, plz believe, u ain't fuckin with my clique..
lyrically blind, no vision cut the strings from your eyes...
you just a puppet love it my decibles bring about your demise..
cause i bust loud and disenegrate Mc's from the blast..
leave u in lyrical winter..skin falling off...how the fuck you think you gon last?

[TheUnderRated]

votes uppin this for votes ...
hit it up honestly one love and holla back and i 'll hit you with a vote if i could but i can't so i'll drop an opinion..

[TheUnderRated]

alright looking for some votes thanx alot y'all much love this was a good battl ehit it up peace and love maerry holidays one...

[TheUnderRated]

and we need some votes on this one here lemme know what ya think kool peace..... and i gotta add more charracters...blah diddy blah/....

[T REX]

alright heres what i though

Flow: def U.R.
Structure: both
Rhyme Scheme: U.R.
Punches: U.R.
Humor: U.R.

pretty straight forward, this one goes to under rated

[TheUnderRated]

thanx for the love uppin this for some votes lets get the votes a raining on in ......don't sleep so you don't get slept on...

[TheUnderRated]

kool kool lets up this looking for some votes we got a battle that i think had potential on both sides tell us what ya think...and shit c mon dawg its on you guys to vote when i get 100 i will actively vote till then i'll give a damn good opionin so drop a link...one..

[Chemarim]

both verse wasn't getting my attention

nookie had some punches but your flow was off

ur you had some ok lines but i wasn't feeling it at all , didn't catch me

but i think that ur took this battle

please vote and up this who ever can
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&pagenumber=2

[BIZ.VICIOUS]

The U.R. took this one, easily.

MC Nookie:

your verse was structured like 3/4/4. Where's the last line in the verse set? Mickey Mouse Socks? Please, don't make shit up cuz it ryhmes. Vet's call that 'filler' and if they see it, they'll vote against you.

The U.R.:

You got skillz kid, flow, personal, punches are aight. Nice shit, can't wait to go toe to toe with ya one day......................

Vote = UR

[TheUnderRated]

alright canuck thanx for being an active voter its an inspiration to the rest on this site... love uppin this for votes love...