you agreed to spit first with ten lines maximum. since ur not elite and therefore cant vote here, and the rule is ur supposed to vote on 2 battles before setting up a thread, i'll vote 4 times. spit ya stuff.
B.I.Detained
Feeble Minded
you agreed to spit first with ten lines maximum. since ur not elite and therefore cant vote here, and the rule is ur supposed to vote on 2 battles before setting up a thread, i'll vote 4 times. spit ya stuff.
aight jus saw this..checkin in to make sure ya know am here...
i'll start keyin now pz................................................ ..................
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Blah keyed good luck pz...
based on Intuition...a Feeble Mind contemplates its own Fate...
..between a Rock n a Hard Place..
it decides whether to Masterbate or jus Dial-A-Date...
see this is the biggest decision this chump'll ever get to Make...
...coz like a piece of Cake...Ima eat this Vet..or should i say Fake
jus coz your a Mod..does that mean Power? ya been here a Sec'
..Cam's been here twice as long..ya gotta be bouncin sum1's Dick
see I'm presented as a Noob..but i still hold more respect than U..
...Feebs best comeback line was "At least I'm in a Crew!!"...
up a 2D Avenue...is where this chump is Going..its a Dead End...
..jus look at me as Uri Gellar and U Spoon..ur ass is Gonna Bend...
i laughed, released catharsis.. all at ya stoned text
how can u diss me when ur not even known yet?
I congratulate you.. your sig shows you live pleasantly...
as the first n00b dumb enough to admit net peasantry...
Detained's a dick. . who's openly content with mild sigs
& soon to be contained & slaughtered...... like wild pigs
get riled big, and go back to dickriding what 50 sings...
all we do is read ya verse, & know ur content w/ shitty things
a comedian.. go back to front lines...i love these funny midgets
cuz how can u key a verse that took over 20 minutes?
shouldnt be postin this here but feebs how do i get in elite?
holla bk pz................................................ .................................................. .............
^ u dont deserve to be in elite...................u git merked here....................i cant vote but w/ever........
punches - feeble
flow - feeble
personals - feeble
structure - feeble
vocab/complexity - tie
metas - feeble
overall - feeble merked......
pc
vote doesnt count. -feeble
Last edited by Richard Parker; December 7th, 2003 at 10:53 PM
^^^stfu u fag....how wack r you? fukin ko's in your sig...
lol go die faggot............................................ ....................
Feebs plz dont say this is a d/r
Feeble Minded wins this one without a doubt. . B.I. had a few concepts, but worded them horrifically. I'd recommend upping the overall complexity in your writing, B.I., & taking more time on your work.
Highlights
BI: "based on Intuition...a Feeble Mind contemplates its own Fate...
..between a Rock n a Hard Place..
it decides whether to Masterbate or jus Dial-A-Date..."
FM: "a comedian.. go back to front lines...i love these funny midgets
cuz how can u key a verse that took over 20 minutes?"
V: Feeble Minded
yea Feeble did win hands down though.
GHOD UP THERE is right., lol. This punch
ended the whole battle for me.
vote - feebleI congratulate you.. your sig shows you live pleasantly...
as the first n00b dumb enough to admit net peasantry...
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
Aight, here's tha breakdown:
B.I...
based on Intuition...a Feeble Mind contemplates its own Fate...
..between a Rock n a Hard Place..
it decides whether to Masterbate or jus Dial-A-Date...
^^ WEAK OPENER, OK PUNCH, 6/10
see this is the biggest decision this chump'll ever get to Make...
...coz like a piece of Cake...Ima eat this Vet..or should i say Fake
^^YO DOG.... YOU WAY BETTER THAN THAT 3/10
jus coz your a Mod..does that mean Power? ya been here a Sec'
..Cam's been here twice as long..ya gotta be bouncin sum1's Dick
^^OK PERSONAL 5/10
see I'm presented as a Noob..but i still hold more respect than U..
...Feebs best comeback line was "At least I'm in a Crew!!"...
^^^GETTING BETTER... 6/10
up a 2D Avenue...is where this chump is Going..its a Dead End...
..jus look at me as Uri Gellar and U Spoon..ur ass is Gonna Bend...
^^HORRIBLE CLOSER 4/10
TOTAL: 24/50 (48%)
AND FEEB...
i laughed, released catharsis.. all at ya stoned text
how can u diss me when ur not even known yet?
^^^WEAK OPENER... OK PUNCH 5/10
I congratulate you.. your sig shows you live pleasantly...
as the first n00b dumb enough to admit net peasantry...
^^WOO HOT TA DEF PERSONAL 8/10
Detained's a dick. . who's openly content with mild sigs
& soon to be contained & slaughtered...... like wild pigs
^^^EH.... 5/10
get riled big, and go back to dickriding what 50 sings...
all we do is read ya verse, & know ur content w/ shitty things
^^^NICE, GOOD PERSONAL 7/10
a comedian.. go back to front lines...i love these funny midgets
cuz how can u key a verse that took over 20 minutes?
^^GOOD PUNCH/PERSONAL 6/10
TOTAL: 31/50 (62%)
Vote = Feeb
no beef
i thought you had to be on the list_______________________
________________________oh well wot do i know lol//////
uppin
i am upping this battle for the first time. . yay. . yay. . now vote fairly. . please. . we need votes. . now. . not later. . we need voters now. .
feeble took this in every catagory in my opinion. there is no question in my mind. if i could vote i would vote for
Feeble.
even though i can't vote i would appreciate it if u would drop an honest vote on this battle.its been goin on to long.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97818
no. . your not supposed to vote in here unless ur on the elite list, plus that poll was set wrong. so sorry............................................. ........
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