10 Lines
No d/r etc
no feeding
Verse's due...2morow sometime..ill post my verse when i get up
goodluck hoe
B.I.Detained
Origin
10 Lines
No d/r etc
no feeding
Verse's due...2morow sometime..ill post my verse when i get up
goodluck hoe
this is my check in biatch......
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good luck rent boy
let executives lead by example pz
Check
word...power to the newbs
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Chomoan Hoe...lets Boogie..time is up
Origin Pisses on the floor in Fear so i use his face as a Mop..
..jus to get Fags d/r Votes...he Opened Origins Sig Shop
hopin i'd go soft coz we Ride 2gether..Bitch mus be Optimistic..
..Prediction=I merk your Ass..No..Thats jus being Realistic
thinkin he's Top Dog..but this Pup don't contain any Skill..
he prob' bites most of his lines..& his top Accolade is Born To Kill(lol)
Origin took Execs too far..coz the Prick wont move from his Chair
..i jus drew 1st blood from your Record..see..still Nobody Cares..
coz you're still a Molecule that Thrives on herbs in Front Lines..
..he's from the same Country as me..now I'm Ashamed its Mine
Detained cant handle the point..cus hes under the knife
B..ya fulla shit..the content’s of the shitty things in life
This aint a survey..so I aint gonna question ya sexuality
We kno ya BI n outa time..n most deff lackin punchuality
Ya Slow..fucka turtle date..imma start dumpin these shells
My punchs sexy n scalp ya..why this monks ringin his bell (bell = end of dick)
Ya never make the LLL mag..cus ya got to many issues
B only became a rapper cus ya want security to frisk you
Pickin on herbs..ya gonna be a peasent all of ya days (wins = n00bs)
Imma call ya Tim Westwood..how ya just wont go away
Read his sig..
Now ya a nuclear concept...merked
Damn.... close shit
Punches- Tie
Wordplay- Neither
Vocabulary- Tie
Multies- Neither
Finisher- Didn't like neither
B.I.Detained had basically an original verse
There wasn't really anything special about it
Origin had a few lines I liked
"Ya never make the LLL mag..cus ya got to many issues
B only became a rapper cus ya want security to frisk you"
"This aint a survey..so I aint gonna question ya sexuality
We kno ya BI n outa time..n most deff lackin punchuality"
"Detained cant handle the point..cus hes under the knife
B..ya fulla shit..the content’s of the shitty things in life"
Therefore i'm going to give this one to origin
Those 3 barz got it to him
But not my much
Shit was still Close as fuck
Vote=Origin
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word up
thanks
uppin 1
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yo this was a close battle but i think origin takes it for better puches and better flow. no hate just and honest vote
my vote-origin
hit these up wit votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98360
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98407
gotta give this to origin sorry bi detained .................................................. .................................................. .............
Why these 2 that can not vote
Tryin to place a vote?
Dumb ass kids
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eh,...
opener+1-tie
closer+1-tie...amazing how both opener and closer were both very similar...ah..the advantage of going second...
punches+2-B
personals+2-B
wordplay+1-O
multis+1-neither
complexity+1-B
originality+1-B
cornyness-2-neither
enjoyment+1-B
overall.....Origin (+3)....B.I.Detained (+9)-------Winner...no hate at all....
please vote honestly here...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98207
Since i dickride the both of you this cant be a hate vote LMAO
jk
On a serious note i thought both of you would come harder...a lot harder
breakdown:
opener retained...nice personal almost funny
closer wow both of you said the same shit...gin was harder
punches gin on an edge
personals retained
wordplay hmm none really
vocab retained
overal....close battle retained won 3 categories origin 2
retained wins
no hate to both of yall
peace
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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aight thanx ya'll...
dont know why but i find it hard to diss peeps i like pz
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1st up
my battle is getting slept on...needs votes.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98207
^^i already voted on this battle so that must be hit up honestly
opening - B I.....liked the personal
flow - B I
punches - origin
personals - B I
multis - none
vocab - tie
personals - B I
closing - origin
Overall
Origin = 2/8
Detained = 4/8
tie/none = 2/8
My vote - B.I. Detained
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hit up the battle in my sig and drop an honest vote...thanks
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