10 linez max brother ill spit first
Lewd
dj-20
10 linez max brother ill spit first
take a ride down to the darkside
kinda goes like this
this guy is some kind of newbie asked who is trippin could be
nothin is lost never cost a dam thing on your tupac gold ring
swing swing whats with the style of hated dont spit words of intensional haten what you goin to createn fat maten in the hoods of ramming bars mooding cars fuedal lives of yo hood could be out of reach for good never could see what goin on for nothing but a secret of a tampon on for youe ronny shon. best can haten for saken shaken cant relate to my haten . now its your turn for this is your first time be scare becuz nothing will ryme take for a crime ride and hide for you wont beat so go take a seat
take a ride down to the darkside
This bitch challenge me he only 1 n 8,
unfortunantly for him,life already planed his fate.
Take it,its takin,this bitch will never be winnin,
cuz fake shit,he spitin,this dj aint even spinnin.
You started in july,thats daisy,umust bin high,
cuz ur lyrics don't even faze me,the just pass by.
Shy?hell no!it me time.so perplexed, u rewind,playback in yo mind,
its so complex leavin you studderinly behind,payback,but u blind.
Too easy,maybe one day I'll make money,went easy on this rhyme
A crime?well it should be,destryed dj-20,defenently no next time!
*spinnin.DJ's spin
*he signed up in july
it was a ok battle both of you could of put mor effort into it both of your punchlines and multis were weak wordplay goes to lewd wordplay goes to lewd over all my vote goes to lewd
Uppin lets get some votes on this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................
lets get some pole votes.UPPPPPPPPPPPIN!!!!!!!!!!.................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............
UPPIN2.................get some honest votes please............................................ .................................................. ............................
UPPIN>>>>>>come on vote on this battle............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............
UPPPPPPPPPPIn..............drop a vote on this.so we can end it please............................................ .................................................. .........
UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... .................................................. .........please vote on this.............................................. ......................
Aiight.......
Opener:lewd
Closer:lewd
Punch's:lewd
Flow:lewd
Structure:lewd
Vocab:lewd
Wordplay:dj (whass tho)
Overall:lewd
Vote:Lewd
0n3
whass=whacc!!!.................................... .................................................. .................my bad my finger slipt!!...................
UPPPPPPPIN>>>>>>please vote on this battle so it can be ended............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
dont up so much dawg... vote on other battles and leave your link
in there... uppin more than 5 times is a sure way to get dq'd.
flow- lewd
punches- lewd
structure- lewd
vocabulary- tie
wordplay- tie
metties- tie
vote- lewd for winning in most categories
DayumNation
aaight thanks for the vote and teh honest opinion........................................... .................................................. ......................................
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