Toner vs Vylent Stalker

[Toner]

8-10 lines
No bitin
No recycling
NO d/r,crew votes

Blind Spit

You down with that...cos I'm checkin and spittin

Peace

[Kwizikal P]

in......spit l8r............................................... .................................................. ..........................................

[Toner]

The stalker become stalked

Takin over?, Makin me suspicious...cos that frontin shit's ficticious,
Ma linez rip faces with strikes that's vicious...You swelled up an lookin bootylicious,
Never leave a threat unfinished...I starve of feedin, leave you mal-nutricious,
Leave this kid with a condition that's serious...to feel his legs again is what this kid wishes,
Speechless, like I stole his 'how to be a rapper' subscription...Back to jus bitchin,
Your pen doen't flow, jus twitchin...Try bitin my shit? Gotta breach my Encryption,
Stalk data through my system, face conviction...cos I defend my scriptutes like Egyptians,
Smoke wit me, Couldn't pass inititation...cough up your lungs, die of Asphixiation,
Yeah I know you, can't forget for a second...Your names next to murder on my criminal record,
Weapon of choice, Lyrical Sword...You fell short like a randsom you couldn't afford.

Peace Y'all

[Toner]

Yo You've been runnin for three days now..hurry up an spit, i jus know you gonna regergatate some prewritten shit foo............................l

[Kwizikal P]

soz i forgot this was on here???????? Spttin now

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Check.................

Why's Toner bitin my Thesis?...He's a newb,a baby, covered in faeces
Fuck the rap prognesis...I kill this fake Mc quick by my Telekinesis
So don't come tryin to beat me...Basically The shit's inpossible
But me merkin this Toner herb n smokin his ashes?Highly probable
This man must talk in encrypted codes, Well tha's what I suppose
Cos I've read ya verse three-Fold...That shit ain't got no flow
Ain't on point, as sharp as My girl's Left tittie,and as soft
I'm sharp as a blade,Leave ya Corpse freyed...Killin T like a nuclear Holocaust
So you wanna beat a newb,Does it make you feel that big?
As wack as You are wit 7 losses...I'll snap this "herb like a twig"

[Toner]

Uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. ........

[Toner]

Uppin............................................. .................................................. .............

[ripetheholysheep]

haha u two have same kinda style..

but yeah..


can't vote or something coz i ain't got enogh posts..


but good shit..


my fav line was from TONER..

Ma linez rip faces with strikes that's vicious...You swelled up an lookin bootylicious,

LOL.. good shit..

[Toner]

Cheers Dude.............................................. .................................................. ................

[Toner]

Yo Uppin 4 at least vote on the battle............................................ ............................

[Chemarim]

yo tone you forgot to poll vote...


im at school so can't really be on this i'll vote in my next class though

[Toner]

Uppin this shit....still nedd an honest vote on the battle...come on where's your christmas spirit????........................................ ...

[Freeman]

i'd say...........

opener - Toner
personals - tie {not many}
multis - tie
closer - Toner {loved that one...randsom....nice }

vote - toner

can u hit this up honestly plz...........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99723

thanks.......only need 2 more votes for the 5-0

laterz

[Freeman]

if the battle is still open when a reach 100, i'll poll my thoughts^^^^

it looks like it mite be cuz no1 is votin on this.....

laterz

[nolonger]

ite,
flow=tone
sructure=tie
opener=tone
closer=tie
punches=tone
personal=k

overall = tone(work on personals)

make sure you hit this up with an honest vote its being slept on and i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99408 thx...............pz