Diverse
double-0 seven
aiight, this was origionally set up in elevated front lines, but it takes like, a week to close a battle their.
my latest battle has just closed and he said i can spit when im ready..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97426
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diverse's verse
You could never beat me, no matter what you say//
Unlike James Bond you won't live to "Die Another Day"//
Cuz my lyrics are D.O.I. they leave you Dead On Impact//
I'll extract your wack raps, and counterattack before you have the chance to react//
You may be a veteran but that just means your over the hill//
easy to kill because your lacking in skill//
You can't compete with the words i complete//
You type and re-type, backspace and delete//
should it really flatter me that 007 wants to battle me?//
If rhymes were measured in weight bitch you'd be anti-gravity//
Floating somewhere way out in the depths of outer space//
After this verse D.O.I. will be asking me to take your place//
explanations....
line 2: Die Another Day is a James Bond/007 movie
line 3: D.O.I. "Dead On Impact" duh......
everything else should be pretty clear
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my verse
i got more 'punches' n personals its like 'diverse' is on my 'knuckles',
i hit you with a 'sonic' boom, so hard that cause your legs to buckle,
'shift' and '/', is the only information i can extract from your raps*,
you putting up a 'fight' like wet 'paper', i tear ya up, leave ya in 'scraps',
in my opening 2 'bars' to many 'shots' that you cant handle it,
like opening a door with no hands, you dont 'grasp' my concepts,
like a tornado you fuck peeps, and when you've finally stopped blowing,
you'll realize,after fuckin wit real me, it hurt like losein, so start no showin,
i think i've already won this battle , this last bar is just for filler,
i offered you another chance at a verse, u declined against a mic killer,
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hard battle to judge..both styles were aight but
BREAKDOWN---
Punches-007
Flow-Both
Sustainment-007
Structure-Both..yet diverse was a little stretched
Metas-007
Vocab-Diverse
Overall-007
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ ...BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97712
uppin for some votes.....this is a pretty good battle.......also, check this one out and drop your vote and a link....................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97697
aiight 1 st time uppin........................... thanks for the vote....................... it is a pretty good battle
peace
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uppin for the second time.............................................. ..........................................
second time uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................
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007? ... i dont know
breakdown
flow-seven
metas-seven
open-diverse...00 was not tight
close-diverse...dont slack
personals-diverse...a few doi wordplays to none
wordplay-diverse...switched it up a lil
punches-diverse...more aggressive
diverse.......................................... and im suprised and dissapointed
no hate do man
aiight, though you didnt read my first line, were i mentioned his name?????????????????????????????????????????????? ??
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uppin.....don't let this shit get slept on.......drop your link and i'll vote on your battle as well.....................
I was reading the first lines and i thought i was going to give it to 007 for sure but by the end of the battle he had completely unwraveled, it's like he stopped trying. I think his punches hit better early in the match but Diverse was more consistent which is what wins battles. Finishers are important man, come hard when it's your last attack of the battle.
For all of these reasons vote= Diverse
flow=diverse
Structure=double
Personals=some but weak
punches=diverse
Complex=double
Keeping the punches interesting.....Thats both but mostly diverse took this at the end...My vote=diverse
uppin this shit again.........don't sleep on it.............drop your link i'll respond to your battle.............................
good clean battle both of you had good pieces
flow tie
wordplay tie
vocab tie
punches diverse
multis diverse
structure tie
over all my vote goes to diverse
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