B.I.Detained
High Class
Rules:
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10 Line Limit
No DR, Hate, Crew, exc...
Due by tommorow ( im doing it now )
NO Feeding
G/L, Im droppin mine now... Mine is a blind, just touched it up. Make sure you keep your word with the blind verse hommie...
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
I make impacts, This clown with noobs breaks his back
How can ya flow's be ' Detained,' when ya skillz aint ' In-tact '
Bitch you the cause of fiction, wins ya soul grown wishen
Being pussy, Facing skill should be ya next ' Crew Mission '...
I rain supreme, a flow feem , call me the lyrical machiene
He must be crazy, Bitch the ' Streets ' was just ya ' Dream '
Im the victor, Ya to soft with the wrong mixture
Take ya sweet and pa-teet rhymes back ' Poetic Scriptures '...
( Tell the record Bye )
I Kill litteral, ya spits gone un-spittable, flow not visable
Im spitten the ' Whole-Bag ', Bitch you pumpin on ya ' Min-Ables '...
Explinations -
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- line 1-2, Only Battles Noobs, and he aint that good ( " aint in-tact " )
- line 3-4, He needs to try a real battle, make it a mission ( cause were in crews )
- line 5-6, " Street Dreams " was a nas rap of course.
- line 7-10, You should know...
---> Better Drop Soon Hommie, and remember " NO Feeding "
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
i can't wait to see how this will turn out. This might get messy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
aight jus got this blood..
thanx for settin it............
dont worry my verses are always keyed
this is my check in pz...^^^and stop freeposting you
aight not hot but here we go
go str8 for the Heart n Decapitate this chump in High Class...
...Affecting his system so much..I made the fag take a Bypass
another Wins Past..I've already fucked up ya Leader..Bash..lmao
...i guess i'll keep the gay train goin..n Merk the rest of the Cast
6-Feet Under n ya Wonder why RB knows High ain't Big...
..you could be hittin me w/ a spade..ya Punches stil wouldnt Dig
Represents his Merk list in Sig..his biggest win is Pine Cone!!..
..segregated off from the rest of us..held up in the D.I.E Zone..lol..D.O.I..get it
his a.k.a's Confusion..that explains why ya keep Biting in Circles..
..you couldn't Shred' sum1's ass if you Fukin hung w/ the Turtles
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Breakdown:
Punches: B.I
Flow: High Class
Creativity: B.I
Vocab: B.I
Enjoyment: B.I
Overall: B.I
This was some close shi'...tite battle dawgz...
decent battle here...BI had much harder punches and personals (crew leader line was funny...lol)....High class had a much better vocabulary and multis......here's a breakdown for u two...
BREAKDOWN
Multis - High Class
Punches - BI
Personals - BI
Metas - High Class (up to date concepts)
Wordplay - High Class (same as above)
Flow - BI
Vocab - High Class
Creativity - BI
Complexity - High Class
RhymeScheme - BI
Overall - it was even in categories....but BI had much harder punches and personals in this battle.....good read from u both though...no hate....just a vote...
peace
4:20
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opener:Tie
closer:b i detained
punches:B I
structure:Tie
vocab:high class
wordplay:Tie
overall:Bi
i cant poll my vote because im in high classes crew, but i broke it down for y'all.
aiight
plz hit the battle in my sig up.
peace
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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overall this battle was pretty even......even harder to judge.........high class had better wordplay and overall flow but detained had better punches and personals............both of your verses were good but i'm gonna have to give it to B.I. in this battle......i think his punches just put him over the top........
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Punches - B.I
Personals - Both
Flow - HC
Originality - Both
Multis - HC
Meta4s - B.I
Wordplay - B.I
Rhyme scheme - Both
Structure - Both
Opener - B.I
Finisher - B.I
VOTE = B.I
Fairly close but B.I edged more catergories an stayed strong thru out his verse... nice battle tho fellas.
Hit this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96869
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Good votes hommie's... I appriciate the honesty up in here... Uppin for his win, Good Battle hommie.... UPPIN
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-High Class a.k.a Confusion
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