10 lines max
no feedin etc
blind spit
i'll hit it up 2moz
no freepostin etc
good luck
hound
B.I.Detained
10 lines max
no feedin etc
blind spit
i'll hit it up 2moz
no freepostin etc
good luck
you wanna play wit me
im a real mutha fuckin g
you cant stop this shit once it star
im to fuckin rap smart
ill load the thing and shoot u threw the hart
if you kenw who u was messin wit ud prolly roll away
cuz my rap lyrics will keep u atbay
i have so much bling bling im a king i buy it on ebay
i no its cheep but im richer then yo azz anyway
dayme i thought you were an alias..shit i'll key summit now i can do this kwik enuf....this is my check in also pz
I've saw more Heat from A 10 Year old, Decrepit Corpse..
..I looked all over for Wackness..now I'm at the Source
Bitch I thought you'd come Harder..Damn i was Wrong..
..must be my habit to battle Retards..so cool it..Mong
ya now in my Teeth..i Grounded n Hounded you Down..
how du expect to write lyrics..wen ya cant produce a Noun
Fuckin Clown..peeps will see that my punches are Wack..
..but they're enuf to even beat you're strongest Attack
coz its a Fact that all Illeterate fags Dont Win Battles...
..they still ride their lifeless Luck,but you're stuck in Saddles
b.i got this shit easily yo he ddint even have to ttry to win! so yeah he got this shit easily. So gj Both of yall my vote is B.I
Can't poll but this will up the thread: vote B.I.Detained
One line from b.i. summed this up...
Fuckin Clown..peeps will see that my punches are Wack..
..but they're enuf to even beat you're strongest Attack
Sorry make that 2 lines............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..
BI takes this one obviously....other dude needs to mad elevate cuz his rhymes are definitely elementary and fundamental and lines are not complex enough.....expand your vocabulary. not the hardest verse by BI but he didnt need it and thats why he diddnt go crazy on the poor fool.
vote: BI
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
no need for a long drawn out breakdown
BI won easy enought
funny thought he would have been an alias too..lol
guess not
anyway...BI took every category
even his checkin was more clever than hounds whole verse..
poll vote BI...
out
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Opener- B.I.
Closer- B.I.
Structure- B.I.
Punches- B.I.
Flow- B.I.
Enjoyment- B.I.
Vote- B.I.
hound u need a lot of elevation but it was ur first battle so i guess i didnt expect much........
hit this up wit honest votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97640
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97643
Aiight....
HOund:shyt wus weak when did u start rappin?!...cuz dat was a srry verse try harder next time!!
^^ didnt have ne bars i liked!!
OK Now
B.I:shyt wus nice like u said punch's were weak but better den hounds!!.....keep it up!!........
Fuckin Clown..peeps will see that my punches are Wack..
..but they're enuf to even beat you're strongest Attack..
^^ dat wus da best bar!!
Vote:B.I
0n3
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3rd_______________finish this plz_______________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ______
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B.I. easily takes this with punches, wordplay, structure, and a touch of personals.
The other guy: elementary and whack format, rhyme scheme, and weak punches.
No contest.
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