aight u first.....no min/max.....due 20 min afta check in......no hate or dickridin...........................1............. .....................
lilbreeze
eMiNeM MiNis
aight u first.....no min/max.....due 20 min afta check in......no hate or dickridin...........................1............. .....................
checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
try and figure out how i spit theres no math needed
bring it to the plate em and get defeated
muh gat will gut check ya
i will just wreck ya
i aint gonna fail ill bet ya
yall fall on ya own so i will just let ya
dey call me dr.j cuz i can throw back
and ill split ya like wolvarine, but ur body parts wont grow back
so yo ass better run when u see me
cuz ill crash ya crib like m-t-v
aight checkin innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn at tha holidae iiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
...:::AiGhT:::...
Check it right welcome to rapbattles u bout to get the tour
Shit thinkin hes good enough look at his posts...four
Notice we dont go easy on eachotha round here we bring our A game
They call you dr j?! bitch u dont deserve a name
I could tell from the first line u had that shit pre written
Put yo shit down fo real or stop spittin
Most of ur lines ended in "ya" sounded like outkast
I aint kiddin wit this cat if he keep talk ima pull it out BLAST!
Shit i think i told u enough
I bet now you dont feel tough
Ima give this bitch one more lesson
Compared to the cats round here i suck so seriously stop messin
heres my vote:
Personals- tie (none)
Punches- minis
Multies- minis
Flow- breeze
Vocab- breeze
Wordplay- breeze
creativity- minis
humor- breeze
OVERALL: 4-3 Breeze
Good first battle breeze just elevate a lil and ull be good
for minis good battle it was close but just keep gettin better
aight lets go get sum votes................upppppppppiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
uppidty up up up................................................ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
METAPHORES - ...
VOCABULARY - ...
PUNCHLINES - eMiNeM MiNis
STRUCTURE - ...
CREATIVITY - eMiNeM MiNis
PERSONALS - eMiNeM MiNis
OPENING - eMiNeM MiNis
CLOSING - lil breeze
MULTIES - lilbreeze
FLOW - lilbreeze
OVERALL - eMiNeM MiNis
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96557
vote - Eminem Minis!
had a better battle verse, had a way better structure...but that's all I saw in each of the verses, really no potential...
vote on this battle...
cannabarz vs opponent
thanx.....
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2-1 me...........................uppin................ .....lets go dont let it sleep..............................
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dont let this one sleep come on and vote......................uppin................... .................................................. .....
Flow-eMiNeM
Structur-eMiNeM Just but Ya Both Had Fucked Up Structure
Punchs-eMiNeM
Opener-lilbreeze
Finisher-eMiNeM
Overall-eMiNeM
Yall gotta Keep Ya Bars a Similar Length And That Will Get Ya Structure MiNiS Just got it For Structure....lilbreeze had the betta opener.....
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minis loses cause he sucks and cause all he did was fed off other due....mini...you're a pussy..you suck, and your rhymes suck...vote-breeze.....breeze, u ain't good either, you're lucky hit fed
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