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Thread: Suicidal Thoughts

  1. December 9th, 2003, 03:42 AM #1
    Throwaway123
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    Suicidal Thoughts

    Replied to Dil J, MC Uski, and Formula MC
    Sorry..
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97209
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97424
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    MethodZ
    Does anyone like me?…or does my life seem like its not worth shit.
    I don't get respect…my world is starting to be the opposite to perfect.
    Im afraid to go to school because I keep getting bullied and teased.
    I keep thinking to myself…if I died would they be pleased?.
    If I was to kill myself there would be no pain and depression.
    No more stressing…it would teach the hatred and bullies a lesson.
    The days of walking home with cut lips and bloody noses.
    Shirts as red as roses…and the threats if I ever exposed it.
    Nights of crying & my family just stared and laughed…it never helped.
    Maybe I was a babie but would I have the guts to kill myself.
    Now I rap to let out my inner pain…but now I get called a wigger.
    So what is the real purpose of life…fuck ill jus pull the trigger.

    Chorus:
    When Your Down And Out And Your Left With No One
    You Think That Your Only Option Is Grabbing A Gun
    Your Left Thinking Would It Matter If You Were To Die
    Think Of Any Means Necessary To Commit Suicide

    Speek.E.Z.
    With The Trigger To My Head, All This Pressure Wants Me Dead..
    Only Way Out Is Biting The Bullet And Tasting The Lead..
    My Parents Said I Am Good For Nothing, My Grades Reflect It..
    Girl Just Dumped Me, Said I Was No Good, Just What I Expected..
    Why Can't I Ever Have Any Fun Amongst All This Pressure..
    With All My Parents Standards It's No Wonder I Never Measure..
    I Just Can't Handle All This Stress, My Life Is Such A Mess..
    From A Young Age My Parents Even Told Me How To Dress..
    It’s Madness I Confess, The Way I Struggle Through The Strife..
    I Wonder Will God Take Me In? Will There Be Another Life..
    Or Should I Take This Knife And End My Life With This Release..
    Because The Only Thing I Ever Wanted Was To Rest In Peace..

    Chorus:
    When Your Down And Out And Your Left With No One
    You Think That Your Only Option Is Grabbing A Gun
    Your Left Thinking Would It Matter If You Were To Die
    Think Of Any Means Necessary To Commit Suicide
    Last edited by Throwaway123; December 10th, 2003 at 02:16 AM
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  2. December 9th, 2003, 05:14 AM #2
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    Shit..Ill stuff...I really elt Meth'z emotion in this...Made me shad a tear...ha ha...nah, really good piece
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  3. December 9th, 2003, 05:38 AM #3
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    YO FEELIN WHAT BOTH U SAYIN. ILL META'S IN SPEEKS VERSE BUT SUM DEEP FEELINS IN METHODZ.

    PEACE OUT

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  4. December 9th, 2003, 10:47 AM #4
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    thought this came good as a collab..both stayed on topic nicely and showed meaning in ya words....nice vocab n metas....good work....pZ...
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  5. December 9th, 2003, 11:38 AM #5
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    yo my reply

    yo yeah this was deep, u doggz dont even need 2elevate, tha way i see it is that yooz got talents, i feel this man right in my heart like!
    el nigger no desea hacer, después no coge con mí que esta perra pudo ser pequeña y caliente, pero si usted me empuja yo no es listo enviar tiros
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  6. December 9th, 2003, 12:20 PM #6
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    dis piece wus well done.......keep dat shyt up!!......n keep droppin ur spits!!.......n elevate!
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  7. December 9th, 2003, 01:32 PM #7
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    yo lets up this
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  8. December 9th, 2003, 01:40 PM #8
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    yea ok.... bout damn time!

    MethodZ...my man my man....
    your verse definetly had some nice imagry, that goes without saying. The rhyme scheme and flow were both consistent...the syllabul count did fall off about 2 times that i saw

    Nights of crying & my family just stared and laughed…it never helped.

    ^biggest example

    Hook...
    nice and simple, right to the point...good

    EZ...
    You took my advice, good job. The read is much better with the commas to space out your words... imagry was decent here, content did it for me here...

    overall...
    you both did good jobs, id just suggest on your next collab, or just next topic, find a way to flip the topic...see how well you guys are when you need to think from a point of view that isnt expected

    ohh...and i wouldnt kill myslef for what happend to those kids...unless i was Shemy

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  9. December 9th, 2003, 01:42 PM #9
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    aiight
    this piece was a nice one,
    methodz came strong with the emotion, and created some nice scenes with his wordplay.

    and speek e z, didnt come weak, so why is no 1 mentioning his verse, you had some nice, emotion an immagery.
    aiight

    not really much to criticize.

    peace

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    leave feed and a link i'll return it


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  10. December 9th, 2003, 04:22 PM #10
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    reply to three other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread, or it gets deleted.
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  11. December 9th, 2003, 04:23 PM #11
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    speek we dope lets do another collab LOL
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  12. December 9th, 2003, 06:17 PM #12
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    YO! i really enjoyed dis peice seein as i wrote a song simular 2 dis
    it wuz all sick an i enjoyed seein da hook thrown in da mix
    it struck close 2 home an i hope 2 c more
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  13. December 9th, 2003, 06:29 PM #13
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    Word this was a pretty dope drop on both parts ... 1st verse had a simple rhyme scheme but after readin' it I seen it didn't really need a more complex one ... 2nd verse E.Z. focussed on multi's more that Methodz did ... Which made it more interestin' to read ... Both came with good thoughts on this collab ... Props to both of ya'll ... Keep doin' ya'lls thing ... Peace

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  14. December 10th, 2003, 12:41 AM #14
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    UPPIN AGAIN.....VOTE IF U THINK THIS SHOULLD BE IN LEGENDS LOL
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  15. December 10th, 2003, 01:27 AM #15
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    i dont know about legends, but this is good from both
    trust me guys, flip the topic next time

    it will do wonders for your sex life

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