12 lines
30 min
blind spit
no b/s/ votes
check in.
-Technician-
Aragorn
12 lines
30 min
blind spit
no b/s/ votes
check in.
checking in...................g'd luck
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Yo.....
Bitch I'm bout to even out my K.O.'s with your wins
Shits 5-0 in my favor before the battle even begins
You think levely but i'll punch you below five hundred
Bones readily crunch, so Ur days alive are numbered
Aragorn, male fans run to his Faucet like Farah Porn
Mad and mourned, a crossbread failure like Carrot-Corn
Don't delay the final result just give it up this Instince
Hiding in the corner i get a vote every time he Winces
Can't go a second wit out Flinchin', need help from henchman
My text weapons like Lynchin', bleed Aragorn's clothes crimson
Technician, exhibits repetition, in-hibits ya style ta make a better edition
Like'a half clever collision, my fists crush your light feather submission
Fuck.. thread was closed when I posted and shit. Gotta re key some shit
Gimme a min.
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Last edited by Meks.; December 8th, 2003 at 11:56 PM
Check... Technician I'll edit your text the way the tech hit 'em...
"S's" don't sound correct with pieces of your neck missin...
Then again, neither do "I's" and "O's"... when you chest explodes..
Plus you can't see me with them eyes.. holes in a broken skull...
I'll put your head in a Vice like Vercetti up in my City....
You think you "nice"... but you don't hit heavy.. battin paws like a kitty...
Technician rhymes with next victim... seems logical to me...
I read in between the lines.. your death's already forseen...
Your avvy's a mirror image... your suicidal at times..
Cause you can't rival my lines... here's your life on the line *hangs up*
They tried closing the thread cause of the blows that I fed...
tech's a trip.. common to clip the way he holding my lead...
nice verse uppin for sum voters in this bitch............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................................
decent battle
Ill be back to vote
as soon as I get registered
I feel like an immigrant, lmao
Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever
aragon had a decent opener...he had iight punches but
they did'nt really hit that hard...disses were kinda blah..
nice flow..did'nt feel the closer...
tech starter was a lil weak..he had a nicer flow..betta punches..
his last six lines iz what killed this battle...
vote tech
blah...pretty good
opener+1-tech
closer+1-tech
punches+2-tie
personals+2-blah
wordplay+1-tie
multis+1-tech
complexity+1-aragorn
originality+1-aragorn
cornyness-2-tech...sorry but farrah faucet??..come on
enjoyment+1-aragorn
overall- Technician (+4).....Aragorn (+6)....-----Winner is Aragorn...no hate but those corny lines gotta go for Technician...please drop honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97367
no^. you just dont get it........try getting Smart.
peace
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opener:Aragorn
closer:Tech
structure:Tie
punches:aragorn
vocab:Tech
wordplay:Aragorn
overall:aragorn
best punches, this what won the battle......
aragorn
Check... Technician I'll edit your text the way the tech hit 'em...
"S's" don't sound correct with pieces of your neck missin...
I'll put your head in a Vice like Vercetti up in my City....
You think you "nice"... but you don't hit heavy.. battin paws like a kitty...
Your avvy's a mirror image... your suicidal at times..
Cause you can't rival my lines... here's your life on the line *hangs up*
technition
Aragorn, male fans run to his Faucet like Farah Porn
Mad and mourned, a crossbread failure like Carrot-Corn
Can't go a second wit out Flinchin', need help from henchman
My text weapons like Lynchin', bleed Aragorn's clothes crimson
Technician, exhibits repetition, in-hibits ya style ta make a better edition
Like'a half clever collision, my fists crush your light feather submission
tech- if you would of hit harder at your beggining you would of won this battle.
nice read, great batttle pees.
can ya drop a fair vote on the battle in my sig
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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this was an okay battle...nuttin special...give the edge to tech..
go job dawg...elevate though..wanna see you up at a elite sum day...
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