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Thread: Philoso~fire!!!!

  1. December 9th, 2003, 12:11 AM #1
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    Philoso~fire!!!!

    I'm Tired but still holdin' up my fists~to~Fight
    Pissed~at~Life, Wired holdin' my pistol~Tight
    Mixed~up~Right with wrong in the Struggle stayin' strong
    I've been gettin'~High barely gettin~by for so~Long
    so hold~on, If you don't know right, How u gunna know~Wrong?
    and you askwhats wrong with Society? it's muthafuckas Eying~me
    Like we aint equal, I thought thats what Martin Luther Died~to~Be?
    So Fuck the Government and the Industry, I want all yall to Witness~me
    Kick~a~Free, at a "Women's Rights" Concert In a "FUCK BITCHES~TEE"
    See these things Don't Come Easily: Love or Success
    A well balance of Health and Stress, Being Called the Best
    So check the Philosophey, Yes it's Probable and Possibly
    there ain'y No such Thing as HEaven or Hell, C'mon GOD TALK~To~ME!
    Ya got me going in Circles, sometimes I wanna Hurt~YOu
    Help me Work~through, I don't wanna COnvert~to an Atheist
    I still have Some Faith~in~this, Please DOn't Make Me Switch
    and Faith Nowadays is Currently~Waste, it's Currency~Based
    Money is the Route of All Evil and the Devil is slowly taking this Place...
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  2. December 9th, 2003, 12:15 AM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...860#post972860

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...864#post972864

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...876#post972876
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  3. December 9th, 2003, 12:26 AM #3
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    I thought this was alright here....your structure was pretty good, just watch the line length on some of the lines thought, kinda stretched out there a bit...You had some good multies in this, i liked those...flow was alright in this....overall good piece...keep at it.
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  4. December 9th, 2003, 12:40 AM #4
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    yea i liked the flow vocab and wordplay good multis and punches good shit
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  5. December 9th, 2003, 12:45 AM #5
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    overall it was good could use a bit with structure but it was good
    "I'm withdrawn from crack so bad my blood itches
    I don't rap to get the women - fuck bitches
    Give me a fat slut that cooks and does dishes" - Eminem
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  6. December 9th, 2003, 01:41 AM #6
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    nice look on the feedback yall.. Appreciate it.... on3...
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  7. December 9th, 2003, 02:57 PM #7
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    uppin' fo some mo feedbackage....
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