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MC Free
Bill Clinton
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checkin in..........rules sed 20 mins to drop.............................................. .......good luck
droppin in...........ermmmmm.............................. .................................................. ......................................few minutes
you spit first actually.......................................... .im jus on fone........................will drop straight afta you tho
rite..........fuck this, bk from the fone now, some speed typing about to go down.............................................. .....................droppin as soon as a type it
im not gona go on bout ur name, thats too easy --
crackin jokes about America, and Monica Lewinski --
thats right, im white, but a ent no Eminem --
my lyrics will break ya down worse than a digestive system --
ima make it easy for you, make all of your decisions --
slit ur wrists and just die, u ent fulfillin none of your ambitions --
ive got a show to do, and ur stoppin me from doin it --
you've set the standard too low, man, uve ruined it --
this verse your about to spit, its gona be terrible, its gona make every1 think ur illiterate --
you shudnt be here man, you shud av been included in ur generations infant mortality rate --
there ya go.............hurry up and spit....u got 1 minute left man................type faster :P......................
come on man.......ur browsing front lines for fuck sake...........................hurry up and type ur shit!
stop lookin for inspiration from other battles and type damn you!
is this annoying ne1 else yet?!?!
its annoying me! he is online and browsing Front Lines ffs!!!
he sed 20 mins to drop afta check in.....he checked in @ 9:31.......40 minutes ago by my clock........come on Bill.....you layed down the challenge.......u can at least drop.....dont be scared!
hurry up fool
sorry man but stop yer fucking free posting
i jus saw this ill key it up now
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MC free bout 2 B a fucken herb picking N tha gardens
Tried 2 diss me G but failed horribly,kill u & add 1 more topic 2 my sins
U B the worst kinda plant,roll U up & smoke U like a joint
Stab U N the eye 2 fix yer sight,homie Ur done,get the point
Im acid & yer that of unknown masiah,ill melt u down till ya retire
post up a fly-ER & show yer genetailia 2 the public,bow down im the sire
Coudent hit a punchline even if U Ali,yous B steadaly fumbling like a football
Even quarterbacks could do better cuz son U the one always getting sacked,u fall
So stay home like home alone blown out,yer brains flown 2 my disscount lown,its all about
I thrown this win like a bitch when she mowned loud,2 bullets in ya dome from a double crome spout
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Opener- MC Free
Closer- ...
Punchlines - MC Free
Flow- MC Free
Structure- MC Free
Enjoyment- MC Free
Bill, ur stuff doesnt flow well, work on dat, shorten ur lines or sumthin, cuz the way u have it now is really affecting the pwoer of ur punchlines.
Oh i forgot, my vote goes to
Vote- MC Free
Ill poll when I get 100 posts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97040
Return the favour by posting a honest vote der.
yo bill u need to sit and elevate ur self b4 u battle anymore ur 0-7 dowg dat means ur doin something wrong no hate just say sit and write and get ur mind right first.......with that said Free took this wit a landslide victory!!!!
drop ur votes here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97042
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