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Thread: rule (Soft Focus) vs LM (D.O.I)

  1. December 4th, 2003, 06:43 PM #1
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    rule (Soft Focus) vs LM (D.O.I)

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    Verse Due Dec 9th.

    Topic: Unimagineable Nightmares

    Good Luck.
  2. December 4th, 2003, 07:15 PM #2
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    chekcin in................................................ .................................................. ..

    good luck LM
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  3. December 4th, 2003, 08:28 PM #3
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    I'm unprepared haunted by mercyless demons
    Leaving me in aginy my soul itself is screaming
    Trapped in a fantasie of the devils hate children
    I can't adapt to visons of how people killed 'em
    Although I close my eyes I see the lost flesh
    Ghost asking my dreams to resurect death
    Minds losing piece by piece by lose of sleep
    I was a rose from concrete now a lost sheep
    My peddles falling my medow is a graveyard
    Hearing souls calling think it was braveheart
    All because of the scene my mind repeats
    Over and over of sleeping with dead beats
    Fetish to see beyond normal who now dwell
    Help comunicate with souls trapped in hell
    Struggle in my mind why this painful torture
    Did I do something to provoke the dead culter
    Is this a blessing to talk to souls from the past
    A gift a chance to break the obscene glass
    Closing my eyes is dandersous or so it seems
    The devils work? Or god like angel like beams
    While I sleep I can't answer different questions
    Tryen to understand dead is my godly lessons
    Theres no bliss while i'm asleep i'm worried
    For am I even alive or actually really burried
    All in all thus does not matter but i'm gifted
    My resting curiosities I vow to keep restricted
    They ask me questions of how tobe reincarnated
    Jeezus has spoken to me an why god retaliates
    With thunder from the oceanly sky
    Every drop of rain another human dies
    Crazy I can hardly believe it myself
    Horryfing me it's preventing my good health
    I'm losing hold of my bodily control
    Let the spirites free why am i consoled
    Leaving me sweating grasping for air..
    Good and evil trapped in my mind..im scared
    Unprepared i'm losing my thoughts of christ
    Blood over love I hate my p.m to a.m life
    Trully believe i encounter the spirites of god
    Who didn't make it hell or heavon lost in the fog
    I pray that these souls be free sent up stairs
    For i'm dieing in my sleep....
    From these Unimagineable Nightmares

    hope this is good.....
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  4. December 7th, 2003, 04:18 PM #4
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    I've just found this I didnt know it had been set up. I'll post ASAP.............................................. ........
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  5. December 7th, 2003, 04:46 PM #5
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    All these devils and goblins surround me every night...
    It's a relief when I open my eyes to the mornin light...
    Coz my chest feels tight everytime this darkness falls...
    The worst place is inside these 4 bedroom walls...
    But exhaustion calls so I've got to be brave...
    I've got to sleep or I'll go to an early grave...
    A good nights sleep is all I crave but it doesnt come...
    They say god punishes people's sins, what have I done...
    All I wanna do is run and never stop or look back...
    Coz it feels like my dreams have been hijacked...
    Once, my life was intact, I was a happy child...
    But that changed when my sleep became more wild...
    All my fears piled on to me and now I feel like I've fell...
    I've sliped, stumbled all the way down to this hell...
    And It's hard to tell If I'll ever make it up to heaven...
    Coz my nights have been like this since the age of 11...
    My membrane has been severed, and I'm loosin concentration...
    I hate to shut my eyes coz I know these will soon be comencin...
    And I'm sensin that these unamaginable nightmares...
    Are always gonna be there...

    Peace!!!
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  6. December 8th, 2003, 04:24 PM #6
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    uupin for votes on this crew battle............................................ .................................................. ...................

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    while you write to rapbattles I perform on stage

    How's it feel to lack in comparison?............
  7. December 9th, 2003, 07:13 AM #7
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  8. December 9th, 2003, 12:16 PM #8
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  9. December 9th, 2003, 05:07 PM #9
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  10. December 9th, 2003, 05:24 PM #10
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    good battle...nice reads by both

    but honestly i think rule won with better metaphors and vocab that was precise...no hate at all

    hit this up wit honest vote please
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93220

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  11. December 9th, 2003, 09:10 PM #11
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    apreciated...but ye need ta poll vote...

    uppen

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  12. December 9th, 2003, 09:35 PM #12
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    ask a mod to edit the poll.............................................. ...................................

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    while you write to rapbattles I perform on stage

    How's it feel to lack in comparison?............
  13. December 9th, 2003, 10:31 PM #13
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    I pm'd Ed so hopefully he'll fix it

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  14. December 9th, 2003, 10:34 PM #14
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    yea..........rule just had better punchlines.........and they was more consistent

    punchlines - rule
    flow - tie
    structure - tie
    topic consistency - tie
    vocab/complexity - tie
    metas - lm
    opener - rule
    closer tie
    overall - rule

    hit this battle up honestly

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97408

    vote doesnt count - punches in a topical????? i believe u didnt read. -feeble
    Last edited by Richard Parker; December 16th, 2003 at 01:11 AM
  15. December 9th, 2003, 10:46 PM #15
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    dammit thats two of you now who didnt post a poll......assholes lol............................................... .................
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