PinkSlip Battle: Walter Wall vs. Talon (Must have 300 posts to vote)

[Walter Wall]

10 Lines
No crew, no hate, no d/r
No biting, no recycling, no feeing
He spits first by 5:00 Central
I spit ASAP after him
You must have 300 Posts to vote!
LOSER IS IP BANNED

[Knight Mayor]

U Don't Contain The Mucous That I Do
This Time I'm Back With Pain Abusin His Spinal
Walter Is Unlike A Brick Cuz He Will Never Get Laid
This Kid Had Writer’s Block So He Asked For My Block-aid
Whoever Thinks Bonafide Will Prevail
Is Leaving A-Trail Of Semen From Walter To His Bed
Check Your Keyboard This Battle Is Over Period
And On Top Of That You're Getting An L
Walter Tries To Mirror My Style
Kid You're Not Raw I Was Ill At Birth
Wanna Know What A Krim-n-l Like Me Es
Even With Typos you Like To See Me Kill-n-Mirk

(look at your keyboard...L is on top of the period)
(WHOAAA...krim-n-l like me es = see me kill-n-mirk...)

Aight Your Turn.....

[Walter Wall]

I said lets see eye to eye.............and you decided to blink
Kids named after spread eagle.....he was born to see pink!
I'll send Vida to produce ure rhymes...... still not fine tuned
Crew's rhyme reapers on it, it's ironic...that theyll die soon!
Talon's try'n to catch up to my rhymes that are must heard
Reps american eagle... how's he never heard of Structure?
I rhyme special as handicapped parking......always up front
Ure not a casulity; its all in the family...now that ure sonned
Im a seasoned vet kid! so watch your fall and enjoy the trip
cuz you were smooth and cold as ice....until u were slipped!

[Walter Wall]

Upp'n
For
Votes

[Cels]

opening - walter
flow - walter
punches - both
vocab - talon
personals - walter
metas - walter
multis - talon
struct - walter
closing - walter

overall:

walter = 6/9
talon = 2/9
both = 1/9

my vote - walter wall

[Young Philly]

U Don't Contain The Mucous That I Do
This Time I'm Back With Pain Abusin His Spinal
Ok...Just a 5/10 Tho. Not a good ryme.

Walter Is Unlike A Brick Cuz He Will Never Get Laid
This Kid Had Writer’s Block So He Asked For My Block-aid
Hmm... Not to bad. 7/10.

Whoever Thinks Bonafide Will Prevail
Is Leaving A-Trail Of Semen From Walter To His Bed
Check Your Keyboard This Battle Is Over Period
Not to bad again. Just ok tho. 7/10.

And On Top Of That You're Getting An L
Walter Tries To Mirror My Style
Complicated, witty. 8/10.

Kid You're Not Raw I Was Ill At Birth
Wanna Know What A Krim-n-l Like Me Es
Even With Typos you Like To See Me Kill-n-Mirk
Very witty. 10/10

Creativity-9/10
Structure-2/10
Overall Punches-7/10
Overall Complexity-9/10
Enjoyment-8/10

Overall- 72/100

I said lets see eye to eye.............and you decided to blink
Kids named after spread eagle.....he was born to see pink!
Nice punch. 8/10

I'll send Vida to produce ure rhymes...... still not fine tuned
Crew's rhyme reapers on it, it's ironic...that theyll die soon!
Uhh.. Ok. 6/10

Talon's try'n to catch up to my rhymes that are must heard
Reps american eagle... how's he never heard of Structure?
LOL. Nice personal wit punch. 10/10

I rhyme special as handicapped parking......always up front
Ure not a casulity; its all in the family...now that ure sonned
Nice punch. 8/10

Im a seasoned vet kid! so watch your fall and enjoy the trip
cuz you were smooth and cold as ice....until u were slipped!
LOL. NICE. 9.5/10

Creativity-8/10
Structure-9/10
Overall Punches-8/10
Overall Complexity-8/10
Enjoyment-9/10

Overall-81.5

Walter came out pretty nice. His punches were connecting and also had a few personals in da mix. Best bar from him.

Talon's try'n to catch up to my rhymes that are must heard
Reps american eagle... how's he never heard of Structure?

Good job.


Talon came with a few good lines but made it hard to read with his structure. Big downfall for him. Da L over period wuz pretty complicated and original. I liked dat. Best bar from him.

Kid You're Not Raw I Was Ill At Birth
Wanna Know What A Krim-n-l Like Me Es
Even With Typos you Like To See Me Kill-n-Mirk

Sorry to say it, but Talon is leaving. Sorry, but da scores never lie.

Vote...Walter Wins

[And Death]

METAPHORES - Walter Wall
VOCABULARY - Talon
PUNCHLINES - Walter Wall
STRUCTURE - Walter Wall
CREATIVITY - Talon
PERSONALS - Walter Wall
OPENING - Walter Wall
CLOSING - Walter Wall
MULTIES - ...
FLOW - Walter Wall

OVERALL - Walter Wall

[Richard Parker]

this is sad. you didnt even make walter try.
and trust me, thats sad.


vote walter.
he won every category, so why bother relist what they said?
rhyme reapers must really stink i guess. thats aite. they might have some skill...in a LONG time.

keep upping, oops i forgot ur leaving the site...well.. pz

[Walter Wall]

lol at keep upping

guess Ill do it for him

Upp'n for Talon.........................RIP

[Walter Wall]

upp'n
for
the
about
to be
recently
deceased

[Knight Mayor]

Man IDC If I Get Banned Becuz I Actually Have A Life Away From The Net So Peace Out And I Dont Give A Fuck

[it's GQ]

Man, nice battle fellas. Nice job by Walter with his opener, he had me rollin'...

I said lets see eye to eye.............and you decided to blink
Kids named after spread eagle.....he was born to see pink!

Nice!!!

Talon had some goo lines, but werent as strong as Walters. Great wordplay by both, and the punches were strong and funny. It was kind of one-sided, but then again, Talon stayed strong until the very end. Nice job guys, keep it up.

Vote: Walter