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Thread: Rise of the Underground - feat. Rule

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    Rise of the Underground - feat. Rule

    "Rise of the Underground"

    [Chorus x2]
    We're the axle on which rap revolves around
    Spit these lyrics like slugs, round after round
    We are the kings of rap so we wear a crown
    And what this is, is a rise of the underground

    [Verse 1 - Rule]
    Restricted Underground Lyrical Epic lost in raps mentality
    Name stands for Rule means disolve the false rap reality
    Struggle acumilate a base to hold a mic & stand strong
    To say what you gotta say and not feel loyaly wrong
    Stereotypes and unnecessary anger's always around
    Provoking talented artist to a new rout an backdown
    From the stage but it isn't fair there ears are caged
    Word should be blazed leaven the listener amazed
    Desires for youngsters in poverty was mainstream
    Underground is an angel blessin the lost beam
    Lord why take the game and turn the tables back
    Incourage kids to write don't leave the art abstract
    Undergrounds are greedie we're comen for yours
    Underground rose we're destined to achieve more
    Sending a shock wave that has a beat or arcapela
    We're spinnin this game around faster then a perpela

    [Chorus x2]
    We're the axle on which rap revolves around
    Spit these lyrics like slugs, round after round
    We are the kings of rap so we wear a crown
    And what this is, is a rise of the underground

    [Verse 2 - MP~PHASIZ]
    Our obligation is to form a relation with listeners of all variations
    With innovations of elevation forced by the willing determination
    The mainstream reigning supreme is only an incentive scheme
    Lyrics that are agleam will send these soft artists downstream
    It's fucking twisted how everyone overlooks the unlisted gifted
    The industries tightfisted and insisted to sign us but we resisted
    Underground is a blur and not even a connoisseur will demur
    That's why when the cheddar's handed out we get no confer
    Held by the chains in which retains the thoughts in our brains
    Til broken and the reign then is equal to archeological remains
    Like a spark in the night it's time to ignite serving as a fright
    Success is in sight as I recite the verse that I chose to write
    Earth turns cold, people froze in a mold, the onlookers behold
    Drama unfolds, listen to what's been told, the game's undersold
    Nowhere to go but down, talk of the town, we shall be renowned
    Don't look for skill it can't be found, trapped within our voices sound

    [Chorus x2]
    We're the axle on which rap revolves around
    Spit these lyrics like slugs, round after round
    We are the kings of rap so we wear a crown
    And what this is, is a rise of the underground
    Last edited by And Death; December 8th, 2003 at 06:40 PM

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    that was pimp.

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    You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback in or this will get deleted...

    But yeah this was pretty good....I liked the structure in this it was pretty good....Your flow was alright i thought, stayed on point i thought for the most part...Your vocab was pretty good in this as well...overall this was a pretty good piece...keep at it.

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    Aight y'all, give us your 2 cents.

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    Uppin this...

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    I Was Feelin This. Flow Was Solid Throughout, You Complimented Each Other Well. Topic Is A Lil Played, But I Dealt With It. Piece Was Ill, Rule, Ya Verse Was Good, Flowed Good. Phasiz, Loved The Multi's, Great Flow. Keep Um Comin.

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    Thanks for the reply

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    Anyone else gon' hit this up?

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    feelin the flow, was a good peice, i got the impression that it would sound good on audio........Nice peice keep on droppin...............
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    ^Thanks

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    Keep it up Homie,shyt wus good!!...nice work.(wanna heard da audio!!)....holla at me if u do 1!!.....~1~

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    that wuz tight
    word use kicked ass

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    Originally posted by FlowzLuCiouS
    Keep it up Homie,shyt wus good!!...nice work.(wanna heard da audio!!)....holla at me if u do 1!!.....~1~
    I do audio but I aint sure about Rule. So I'll have to find out from him first.

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    This pz was completly on pac. You had the flow the beat the topic everything. I especially enjoyed the vocabulary that's what makes it worth reading. Hell I think I have a large vocab but I do not know what algeam means. listen got to cut this short you do good work tell rule he did a good job as well I gotz to go. pz and luv
    hit up hate-hate relationship for me pz

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