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This was straight hommie. My suggestion, is to work on your rhyme scheme, vocab, and maby imagery a little bit more. Your good at it, dont get me wrong. But I think this would be alot better if you used those more elevated. It was a good drop hommie. I like reading personal topics, kinda lets you know who the rapper behind the computer is.Ya know hommie.Rate -7.5 /10
Do me a fav. and go check my flow " Complicated Man " It was a pretty quike write by me, But I think alot of people will like it on the site. Tell me what you think of it hommie, aight.
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-High Class a.k.a Confusion
ty..... i'll check it out for sure... peace
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How you got into the rap game?
YOU'RE A FUCKING TEXTCEE THERE IS NO RAP GAME
^ actually, i just dont have audio equipment on my computer - i battle with a mic in real life among friends and at party's sometimes...
now unless your going to give a constructive comment, dont post at all.
Get a mic preamp. . Download cool edit for free. . Duhhh what else do you need?
^ i dont know thats the problem.. lol :S
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