C-Lo VS C Rocka

[C-Lo]

8-10 line, anythang goes spit ur shit playa............................................. .,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[C rocka]

checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

[C-Lo]

lets do this,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, good luck man, rock ur shit,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[C rocka]

Watch how I make this bitch disappear like magic/
Grave stone dug up,his body in a cascatte/
This kid is about to be lunch,damn im starving/
attack you from behind,creep through the trees like Tarzan/
While you be internet thuggin i'll be in your house muggin/
He makin people vote for him because he can't get luvin/
I spit poison,you about to taste this/
got him tied up like lacess,leave him faceless/
Stop copying me punk erase the C from your name/
C-lo about to get hit high like a nigga on mary-jane/

[C-Lo]

c-rocka aka cock blocka, man hes vile
motherfucka sucks cock like its goin outta style
end up walkin that aisle while baggin groceries at super walmart
i know ur new man, but im the heater,the street sweeper,
glad to meet ya sweet heart, i didnt mean to stop u before u start
my rhymes tight like a virgin was
im slick like a surgeon when he puts on his gloves,
and its time to operate, if ur lucky i wont fully casterate,
ill leave u about half what u came in with
so that will be what about 3/4 of an inch bitch?


Fuck it Im out-

[C-Lo]

nice battle rocka, upppppiiinnnnn this shit.......... hollaaaaaaaa......................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[C rocka]

yeah this is a good battle mayn......uppin this ish.,............................................. .................................................. ......

[C rocka]

.............uppin................................ .................................................. ........

[C-Lo]

uppppppinnnnnnnnnn,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, fuck lets get some votes in here

[C rocka]

i know......i wonder who gonna take this.............................................. .................................................. ............................

[Verse112]

Gonna break it down like this..
flow - C rocka
punches-C-Lo
multis-C-Lo
metas-C-lo
closer-C-Lo
overall- C-Lo
good battle both C-lo just spit it a bit more veteran like both of you might wanna look at some veteran battles to get some ideas of the kind of things people look for....one.

[C rocka]

thanx dawg appreciate the honest feed back i will work on it................................................ .............................

[rule]

Flow weak
Metas multies, weak
Punches weak
open close. weak

overal this was a weak battle, not bad for newbs but you could elavate in some areas just keep at it and try tobe creativer but im gunna have to go with c lo his was a tad better overal peace

[C rocka]

can sum 2 plz vote......................uppin................... .................................................. .........................

[C rocka]

u.p.p.i.n.n....................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....