Some n00b....with my name...didn't make the thread a pollable battle. so here it is.
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Meters
Some n00b....with my name...didn't make the thread a pollable battle. so here it is.
His verse....
ok look im battlin this fool and im spittin lyrical hell//
im the unleashed dragon busted out the shell//
im here to spit at you pure fire//
your a piece of shit just like firestone tires//
you cant touch me what the hell kinda name is meters//
is that short for your dick is 2 cenitmenters?//
thats gonna be the only personal in this rhyme//
spittin these lyrics is just wastin my tyme//
yo retard redrum is MURDER backwerdz Nigga//
when i spit its like a tsunami hitchu ima wigga//
im a storm of words you cant pronounce//
when this battles over like a ball im gunna bounce//
your gettin ripped so hard you aint gonna tell//
i didnt shoot u wit da cun i killed u wit da shell//
wheres the fun at when i pull back one.., shit fuck it this battle is DONE//
My verse...
The dragons flair unleashes a fit of terror/
Sisqo's back without platinum hair: and even gay'er/
Sear your lopped off limbs with lyrical hymns/
So your (h)armless before this merking begins/
My bullets roar like Ethiopians at a grocery store/
While yours pour down your cheeks like your face is the seashore/
Wanna get you outta my hair so I don a black tie/
And rely on you to make like a wig and dye/
Tough guy, you need to elevate like your soft dick/
‘This is as good as it gets’ says the measuring stick/
To get punched you're quick, i'm quick to the punch/
I bet dragon, sheep is the only wool you munch/
Your record now reduced to 0-1, still should be 0-0/
your rhymes carried so little weight, it's like you weren't even here yo
Explanations:
1st : Sisqo called himself the dragon and had platinum hair. Gay people have lots of *flair*. Dragons fire flares.
2nd: Saying that he can't elevate because he's just bad like his dick can't harden because it's just small.
3rd: Doesn't eat out women because women won't get near him
Haha, easy enough, right?
meters got this man
other cat needs 2 elavate
flow/meters
style/meters
punches/meters
personals/meters
opener/none
closer/none
overall/meters
my vote/meters
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Dragon
ok look im battlin this fool and im spittin lyrical hell//
im the unleashed dragon busted out the shell//
(Aight opener, mostly filler there)
im here to spit at you pure fire//
your a piece of shit just like firestone tires//
(Ehh kinda weak)
you cant touch me what the hell kinda name is meters//
is that short for your dick is 2 cenitmenters?//
(Good personal, punch is a lil weak though)
thats gonna be the only personal in this rhyme//
spittin these lyrics is just wastin my tyme//
(And mine, man, ya should be punching not just filling)
yo retard redrum is MURDER backwerdz Nigga//
when i spit its like a tsunami hitchu ima wigga//
im a storm of words you cant pronounce//
when this battles over like a ball im gunna bounce//
your gettin ripped so hard you aint gonna tell//
i didnt shoot u wit da cun i killed u wit da shell//
wheres the fun at when i pull back one.., shit fuck it this battle is DONE//
(^^All that shit is filler, and a weak closer to boot.)
Meters
The dragons flair unleashes a fit of terror/
Sisqo's back without platinum hair: and even gay'er/
(Nice opener)
Sear your lopped off limbs with lyrical hymns/
So your (h)armless before this merking begins/
(Aight, not bad)
My bullets roar like Ethiopians at a grocery store/
While yours pour down your cheeks like your face is the seashore/
(1st line funny, 2nd one maybe its cuz im hungover but i dont get it....)
Wanna get you outta my hair so I don a black tie/
And rely on you to make like a wig and dye/
(Nah)
Tough guy, you need to elevate like your soft dick/
‘This is as good as it gets’ says the measuring stick/
(Funny shit)
To get punched you're quick, i'm quick to the punch/
I bet dragon, sheep is the only wool you munch/
(Nice, I liked the 1st line, decent)
Your record now reduced to 0-1, still should be 0-0/
your rhymes carried so little weight, it's like you weren't even here yo
(Good closer)
No contest, Meters sonned you like your momma was begging for it. Ya gotta throw punches man, not just fill it all up with shit. I was falling asleep thru like half ya damn verse.
^^ forgot to mention, peep my battles for some feedback, the 2nds gettin slept on.....
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i think meters got this shit he came with better punches. but lft yor searching cuz of the explanations. Still his verse was better, unleashed had aight flow then fell off, but had a couple witty lines they just weren't hard hard.
peep my battle's in the sig
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meters took this one. dragon didnt much too much and had so much filler, need to elevate and work on attackin ur opponent
meters went all out
the sisqo line got it for ya
and the wig one was pretty funny too
vote: meters
i would give this to Meters easily...............much better verse, i cant go into explanation because i dont have enough posts, resulting in an unofficial vote...........but u can vote on mine.........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95117
can I kick it?
Thanks anyway Pinacle, upping for votes!!! third time
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upping third time...last was second.
vote, vote, vote, vote.........
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Hit up this battle please...upping 4
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Flow - Meters
Punches - Meters
Metophores - None
Effectivness - Meters
Word Play - Tie
Allusion - None
Vote - Meters
-Hey hommie, make the vote in the pole in ma battle. It says you didnt make the vote. Aight hommie.
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-High Class a.k.a Confusion
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