7. Rob D (2-0) vs. 8. Skiddz (2-0)

[MadMan]

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Your topic: Defies belief

[Rob D]

Checking in.....

Good luck....

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

checkin in...Rob, this is gonna be fire.

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

Aight...Here I go...

Soft, Simple, Is that the Person You thought I'd turn to be?
Ideas, hatred, and first impressions,What you think of me?
Go ahead, spill your thoughts, I have nothing to fight against
I try to give you my best, but in the end, it's still always less
A coward, heartless, no love in life, is that the person you see?
Maybe if you weren't quick to judge, I'd prove wrong your belief
Like, getting to know me isn't hard enough, but Spread rumors?
Just take 10 Minutes to talk, Or is that more than your Ego's used to?
Confused, dazzled, upon the ignorance set foot on our planet now
Knowledge is Power, and the genius is the one who makes no sound..
Society of our Country, The United in all States, and its Contradictions
People are so quick to change, Worship Bush, if he was to get a Crucifixion
Tell Me I am wrong, Tell Me that I don't make You stop and think
Tell Me You don't judge Terrorists, before stopping and Realizing
That America was terrorists to Britain, and we just wanted to be free
Freedom of Speech says you we don't control,But that's what they want you to see
So If maybe the "terrorists" wanted to rid of our "good" influence
Imperialist qualitites of our country, They begin to really fight back
September 11th, 2001 And America Still Doesn't know how to react
So we panic, and the only thing stopping Bush from pressing buttons
Is the Senate...So He wants war with Iraq, and We here,still are reluctant
But it's too late, So maybe there is more to it than the eye can see
More questions to answer,and more people for me to Defy their beliefs..

[Rob D]

Defies Belief


people expect certain character traits,due to colour of skin,
why not attempt to set the record straight,take a look within,
you only see people for who they are,when you look a lil deeper,
dont discriminate,weather a businessman or lowley streetsweeper,
my race doesn't dictate the way i view the world or behave,
for you to assume this is to degrade in the worst possible way,
i dont act 'black' or 'white',just in a way i feel acceptable,
prove ignorant people are often just extremley susceptible,
to sterotypes,like all scousers are thieves & irish stupid,
this is not reality...merely just incorrect bullshit,
created by fools,who spend their entire life confined,
with likewise people,who are afraid to broaden their mind,
expand horizons,experience new cultures and ways of life,
rid themselves of the racist propaganda that is rife,
cant people accept their differences,forget colour related beef,
if they took time to look,what they find might Defy their beliefs,

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92318
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92320
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92341

my battle links.

[Thrust]

Ight...both hit their topics real well...
it was a close one...flow was about equal...
Imagry was about equal also...along with vocab

Tho...i think Rob D gets this...i just got more enjoyment outta it...
by a little tho...Rob just kept me more interested...
just a better story

vote-Rob D

[junio sixnine]

i didnt like this battle.

usually, i enjoy reading stories more. but both had skill, hitting their topics well like u said ^. but i liked how skid flowed, the feel to it. both came nice.

vote skid

[Rob D]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...373#post927373
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92334
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...400#post927400

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

1-1

[Lethargic]

Fuck...tough vote. I liked both stories....very much. Gah...I have to go soon and this is killing me. Both portrayed the topic excellent. I feel like Rob's had more depth, but Skiddz had the better writer's voice. Skiddz flow seemed more on point...and...fuck. Close battle....sorry for rushed vote...seriously though, I'm about to leave soon..

Vote ~ Skiddz

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

2-1 Upp

[Judge Judy]

very hard to judge....
skiddz-
you hit the topic wel and gave the piece a nice feel about it..
it wasnt str8 forward and the flow was nice...jus wish ya woulda been more creative tho..but overall nice piece..rating=7

rob-
i've heard peeps follow a path of race b4 and i didnt feel it..but with i did..mainly coz of the flow n sustainment of the piece..wasnt too complex but you did keep to your story and explain all thru beggining to end...rating=8

vote-Rob D

[Rob D]

Damn, Skiddz i told you this was gonna be a close battle.
2-2

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

yep...This is way too close.